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::*[[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] Hi, I came by to promote this, but note that the QPQ was already used for [[Template:Did you know nominations/Priya Jhingan]]. (The QPQ also was not complete; it needs to cover the [[WP:DYK#Eligibility criteria|five main DYK criteria]].) [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 20:13, 3 September 2017 (UTC)
 
::*[[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] Hi, I came by to promote this, but note that the QPQ was already used for [[Template:Did you know nominations/Priya Jhingan]]. (The QPQ also was not complete; it needs to cover the [[WP:DYK#Eligibility criteria|five main DYK criteria]].) [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 20:13, 3 September 2017 (UTC)
 
:::* {{ping|Yoninah}} sorry about that I did not realize that I had used the same QPQ on [[Template:Did you know nominations/Priya Jhingan]], I have added a new QPQ please do have a look. Thank you. [[User:Fitindia|<font style="background: orange" face="Courier" color="#FFFFFF">'''&nbsp;FITINDIA&nbsp;'''</font>]] 20:33, 3 September 2017 (UTC)  
 
:::* {{ping|Yoninah}} sorry about that I did not realize that I had used the same QPQ on [[Template:Did you know nominations/Priya Jhingan]], I have added a new QPQ please do have a look. Thank you. [[User:Fitindia|<font style="background: orange" face="Courier" color="#FFFFFF">'''&nbsp;FITINDIA&nbsp;'''</font>]] 20:33, 3 September 2017 (UTC)  
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::::*[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] Thank you. Restoring tick per Cwmhiraeth's review. [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 20:48, 3 September 2017 (UTC)
 
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Revision as of 20:48, 3 September 2017

Tara Rani Srivastava

Created by Fitindia (talk). Self-nominated at 11:56, 25 July 2017 (UTC).

  • 16px New enough, barely long enough. The article has some grammar issues, and the citation formatting isn't complete or consistent. No copyvio, but parts of the article should be rewritten to meet the Manual of Style. The hook is good, interesting, neutral, and cited. QPQ is done. The article can be eligible after considerable revisions. --Hameltion (talk, contribs) 14:19, 17 August 2017 (UTC)
  • Hameltion, thank you for the effort I guess just not enough info to take this forward.  FITINDIA  08:36, 27 August 2017 (UTC)
  • Some parts are still a little repetitive, and someone else should do a new review. --Hameltion (talk, contribs) 20:24, 29 August 2017 (UTC)

ALT1: ... that when her husband was shot by police during a Quit India protest march, Tara Rani Srivastava bandaged his wounds with her sari and continued leading the march?

16px New reviewer needed. --Usernameunique (talk) 00:24, 2 September 2017 (UTC)

  • 16px This article is now long enough and was new enough when nominated. The problems mentioned above have been dealt with, the ALT1 hook is more interesting than the original, the article is neutral and I detected no copyright issues. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 17:39, 3 September 2017 (UTC)
  • 16px Thank you. Restoring tick per Cwmhiraeth's review. Yoninah (talk) 20:48, 3 September 2017 (UTC)