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:::*Wouldn't simply writing "fear of flying" or "afraid of flying" be more accessible to the MP audience? — [[User:Crisco 1492|Crisco 1492]] ([[User talk:Crisco 1492|talk]]) 00:53, 28 September 2013 (UTC) | :::*Wouldn't simply writing "fear of flying" or "afraid of flying" be more accessible to the MP audience? — [[User:Crisco 1492|Crisco 1492]] ([[User talk:Crisco 1492|talk]]) 00:53, 28 September 2013 (UTC) | ||
::::Sure. I've updated the original hook. '''''[[User:Taylor Trescott|<span style="color:#B6B3FF; font-family: Courier">Taylor Trescott</span>]]''''' - <sup>[[User talk:Taylor Trescott|my talk]]</sup> + <sub>[[Special:Contributions/Taylor Trescott|my edits]]</sub> 00:55, 28 September 2013 (UTC) | ::::Sure. I've updated the original hook. '''''[[User:Taylor Trescott|<span style="color:#B6B3FF; font-family: Courier">Taylor Trescott</span>]]''''' - <sup>[[User talk:Taylor Trescott|my talk]]</sup> + <sub>[[Special:Contributions/Taylor Trescott|my edits]]</sub> 00:55, 28 September 2013 (UTC) | ||
| + | ::::*And the alt? Otherwise looks good to go. — [[User:Crisco 1492|Crisco 1492]] ([[User talk:Crisco 1492|talk]]) 01:15, 28 September 2013 (UTC) | ||
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The Great Plane Robbery
- ... that Jack Holt, who was afraid of flying, starred in The Great Plane Robbery?
- Reviewed: The Lone Wolf Keeps a Date
Created by Taylor Trescott (talk). Self nominated at 13:36, 21 September 2013 (UTC).
Long-enough article with an interesting hook. Well-cited throughout body, with no copyvio. Fit for the main. ☯ Bonkers The Clown \(^_^)/ Nonsensical Babble ☯ 14:33, 21 September 2013 (UTC)
I don't find an unknown person commenting on irony to be very interesting. I'd like to suggest a far more direct approach:
- ALT1: ... that Jack Holt, who had aerophobia, starred in The Great Plane Robbery? —BlueMoonset (talk) 19:02, 26 September 2013 (UTC)
- That hook is fine by me. Taylor Trescott - my talk + my edits 19:10, 26 September 2013 (UTC)
- Wouldn't simply writing "fear of flying" or "afraid of flying" be more accessible to the MP audience? — Crisco 1492 (talk) 00:53, 28 September 2013 (UTC)
- Sure. I've updated the original hook. Taylor Trescott - my talk + my edits 00:55, 28 September 2013 (UTC)
- And the alt? Otherwise looks good to go. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 01:15, 28 September 2013 (UTC)