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* '''ALT1''' ... that [[New York Yankees]]' [[prospect (sports)|prospect]] '''[[Ty Hensley]]''' was allegedly assaulted by another athlete because Hensley did not want to discuss his $1.2 million [[signing bonus]]?
 
* '''ALT1''' ... that [[New York Yankees]]' [[prospect (sports)|prospect]] '''[[Ty Hensley]]''' was allegedly assaulted by another athlete because Hensley did not want to discuss his $1.2 million [[signing bonus]]?
 
:::*Good stuff. --[[User:Dweller|Dweller]] ([[User talk:Dweller|talk]]) 16:37, 5 February 2015 (UTC)
 
:::*Good stuff. --[[User:Dweller|Dweller]] ([[User talk:Dweller|talk]]) 16:37, 5 February 2015 (UTC)
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*[[File:Symbol redirect vote 4.svg|16px]]  Full review needed now that hook is set. [[User:BlueMoonset|BlueMoonset]] ([[User talk:BlueMoonset|talk]]) 19:47, 6 February 2015 (UTC)
  
 
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Revision as of 19:48, 6 February 2015

Ty Hensley

  • Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Radioplane
  • Comment: As you can see from the article history, I created this as a redirect on November 12, 2012. In the baseball project, we have a standing consensus to use these minor league player pages to incubate articles on people who may become notable. This is that Nov 12, 2012 edit where I created the content. As of a few days ago, it was still there. To make it as easy as possible here, I simply unmerged that content with this edit, which had 688 B of prose. Now, it's over 3800, which is 5x. Given the nature of the incident that happened, I'm open to discussion on what a good and appropriate hook would be.

5x expanded by Muboshgu (talk). Self nominated at 15:56, 9 January 2015 (UTC).

  • Comment The proposed hook is a mess of confusing pronouns. I can't work out whose bonus who didn't want to discuss. --Dweller (talk) 16:01, 5 February 2015 (UTC)
  • How's this? – Muboshgu (talk) 16:25, 5 February 2015 (UTC)
  • Good stuff. --Dweller (talk) 16:37, 5 February 2015 (UTC)
  • Symbol redirect vote 4.svg Full review needed now that hook is set. BlueMoonset (talk) 19:47, 6 February 2015 (UTC)