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* ... that '''[[Vénus de Quinipily|The Iron Lady]]''' ''(pictured)'' was an object of a pagan veneration and was thrown into river twice as many couples performed erotic acts near the statue?
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* <s>... that '''[[Vénus de Quinipily|The Iron Lady]]''' ''(pictured)'' was an object of a pagan veneration and was thrown into river twice as many couples performed erotic acts near the statue?</s>
 
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:* I've done [https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=V%C3%A9nus_de_Quinipily&diff=607597576&oldid=607172434 some copy-editing] on the article.  The hook seems reasonable, but I haven't checked any sources. --[[User:Slashme|Slashme]] ([[User talk:Slashme|talk]]) 08:01, 8 May 2014 (UTC)
 
:* I've done [https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=V%C3%A9nus_de_Quinipily&diff=607597576&oldid=607172434 some copy-editing] on the article.  The hook seems reasonable, but I haven't checked any sources. --[[User:Slashme|Slashme]] ([[User talk:Slashme|talk]]) 08:01, 8 May 2014 (UTC)
 
::[[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] The hook needs to be reworded.  While the article says {{tq|It is said that "foul", "indecent and obscene" rites were also practiced at the statue, and that many couples performed "erotic" acts near the statue.}} It doesn't actually say when these things happened, and that was only one of several different stories associated with its history.  In a different section below that, it states {{tq|As the statue became an object of a pagan veneration, Charles de Rosmadec — Bishop of Vannes and missionaries requested Claude de Lannion — Lord of Blavet Quinipily, to destroy the statue. In 1661, Lannion ordered the statue to be thrown into the Blavet river.}} and in 1670 Lannion ordered it smashed into pieces, but it was instead thrown into the river again. [[User:Maile66|— Maile ]] ([[User talk:Maile66|talk]]) 20:42, 14 May 2014 (UTC)
 
::[[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] The hook needs to be reworded.  While the article says {{tq|It is said that "foul", "indecent and obscene" rites were also practiced at the statue, and that many couples performed "erotic" acts near the statue.}} It doesn't actually say when these things happened, and that was only one of several different stories associated with its history.  In a different section below that, it states {{tq|As the statue became an object of a pagan veneration, Charles de Rosmadec — Bishop of Vannes and missionaries requested Claude de Lannion — Lord of Blavet Quinipily, to destroy the statue. In 1661, Lannion ordered the statue to be thrown into the Blavet river.}} and in 1670 Lannion ordered it smashed into pieces, but it was instead thrown into the river again. [[User:Maile66|— Maile ]] ([[User talk:Maile66|talk]]) 20:42, 14 May 2014 (UTC)
:::'''ALT 1''': ... that during seventeenth century, '''[[Vénus de Quinipily|The Iron Lady]]''' ''(pictured)'' was an object of a pagan veneration and was thrown into river twice as many couples performed erotic acts near the statue?
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:::<s>'''ALT 1''': ... that during seventeenth century, '''[[Vénus de Quinipily|The Iron Lady]]''' ''(pictured)'' was an object of a pagan veneration and was thrown into river twice as many couples performed erotic acts near the statue?</s>
 
:::*Changed hook and article to add time. However, I dont get your second point about Lannions. Can you elaborate? - [[User:Vivvt|<span style="font:italic bold 11px Georgia, serif"><font color="#808080">Vivvt</font></span>]] <small style="font-size:85%;">([[User talk:Vivvt|<font color="#000000">Talk</font>]])</small> 15:21, 15 May 2014 (UTC)
 
:::*Changed hook and article to add time. However, I dont get your second point about Lannions. Can you elaborate? - [[User:Vivvt|<span style="font:italic bold 11px Georgia, serif"><font color="#808080">Vivvt</font></span>]] <small style="font-size:85%;">([[User talk:Vivvt|<font color="#000000">Talk</font>]])</small> 15:21, 15 May 2014 (UTC)
::::*Sorry for the delay in answering. I didn't see that you had asked me a question when you reworded the hook. And you might want to get an opinion besides mine.  From the way I read the article, the performing of erotic acts is not specifically tied to why the statue was thrown in the river.  The second quote is what I see in the article that says why the statue was thrown into the river.  I'm not suggesting you need to name Lannion in the hook, just that the sentence where is says it was thrown in the river on the orders of Lannion is as I quoted it above. [[User:Maile66|— Maile ]] ([[User talk:Maile66|talk]]) 00:08, 19 May 2014 (UTC)  
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::::*Sorry for the delay in answering. I didn't see that you had asked me a question when you reworded the hook. And you might want to get an opinion besides mine.  From the way I read the article, the performing of erotic acts is not specifically tied to why the statue was thrown in the river.  The second quote is what I see in the article that says why the statue was thrown into the river.  I'm not suggesting you need to name Lannion in the hook, just that the sentence where is says it was thrown in the river on the orders of Lannion is as I quoted it above. [[User:Maile66|— Maile ]] ([[User talk:Maile66|talk]]) 00:08, 19 May 2014 (UTC)
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:::::'''ALT 2''': ... that during the seventeenth century, many couples performed "erotic" acts near '''[[Vénus de Quinipily|The Iron Lady]]''' ''(pictured)'' and it was thrown into river twice for being an object of a pagan veneration?
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:::::*{{ping|Maile66}} I get your point now. I have re-worded the hook. Sorry. I was busy with other article so could not comment here earlier. - [[User:Vivvt|<span style="font:italic bold 11px Georgia, serif"><font color="#808080">Vivvt</font></span>]] <small style="font-size:85%;">([[User talk:Vivvt|<font color="#000000">Talk</font>]])</small> 14:46, 21 May 2014 (UTC)
  
 
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Vénus de Quinipily

Venus de Quinipily

  • ... that The Iron Lady (pictured) was an object of a pagan veneration and was thrown into river twice as many couples performed erotic acts near the statue?

5x expanded by Vivvt (talk). Self nominated at 16:31, 4 May 2014 (UTC).

  • I've done some copy-editing on the article. The hook seems reasonable, but I haven't checked any sources. --Slashme (talk) 08:01, 8 May 2014 (UTC)
Symbol question.svg The hook needs to be reworded. While the article says Template:Tq It doesn't actually say when these things happened, and that was only one of several different stories associated with its history. In a different section below that, it states Template:Tq and in 1670 Lannion ordered it smashed into pieces, but it was instead thrown into the river again. — Maile (talk) 20:42, 14 May 2014 (UTC)
ALT 1: ... that during seventeenth century, The Iron Lady (pictured) was an object of a pagan veneration and was thrown into river twice as many couples performed erotic acts near the statue?
  • Changed hook and article to add time. However, I dont get your second point about Lannions. Can you elaborate? - Vivvt (Talk) 15:21, 15 May 2014 (UTC)
  • Sorry for the delay in answering. I didn't see that you had asked me a question when you reworded the hook. And you might want to get an opinion besides mine. From the way I read the article, the performing of erotic acts is not specifically tied to why the statue was thrown in the river. The second quote is what I see in the article that says why the statue was thrown into the river. I'm not suggesting you need to name Lannion in the hook, just that the sentence where is says it was thrown in the river on the orders of Lannion is as I quoted it above. — Maile (talk) 00:08, 19 May 2014 (UTC)
ALT 2: ... that during the seventeenth century, many couples performed "erotic" acts near The Iron Lady (pictured) and it was thrown into river twice for being an object of a pagan veneration?
  • Template:Ping I get your point now. I have re-worded the hook. Sorry. I was busy with other article so could not comment here earlier. - Vivvt (Talk) 14:46, 21 May 2014 (UTC)