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:* [[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] Approval for main hook, ALT1 and AL2 with my recommendation being the main hook as the most interesting. My reservation about ALT3 is that it's the opinion of someone directly involved with the subject, while this is fine in the article I don't think it's ideal for a DYK hook. Otherwise the article meets newness and length requirements, is well-written and cited with no paraphrasing problems, hooks meet formatting guidelines and are cited, QPQ done.
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::Just a thought – I found the image of Oscar Pistorius slightly distracting in view of events since that photo was taken. I appreciate that it was included to show Ellie Simmonds and the other available images of her are not particularly good, but [[Hannah Cockroft]] has a good image that could be used instead. <font color="navy">[[User:January|January]]</font> <small>(<font color="navy">[[User talk:January|talk]]</font>)</small> 09:54, 17 September 2016 (UTC)
  
 
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We're the Superhumans

Created by ViperSnake151 (talk). Self-nominated at 06:47, 17 September 2016 (UTC).

  • Symbol confirmed.svg Approval for main hook, ALT1 and AL2 with my recommendation being the main hook as the most interesting. My reservation about ALT3 is that it's the opinion of someone directly involved with the subject, while this is fine in the article I don't think it's ideal for a DYK hook. Otherwise the article meets newness and length requirements, is well-written and cited with no paraphrasing problems, hooks meet formatting guidelines and are cited, QPQ done.
Just a thought – I found the image of Oscar Pistorius slightly distracting in view of events since that photo was taken. I appreciate that it was included to show Ellie Simmonds and the other available images of her are not particularly good, but Hannah Cockroft has a good image that could be used instead. January (talk) 09:54, 17 September 2016 (UTC)