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{{*mp}}... that "'''[[White Foxes]]'''", the [[lead single]] of Norwegian singer-songwriter [[Susanne Sundfør]]'s 2012 album ''[[The Silicone Veil]]'', has been described  as "thick with mythology and dark as a nighttime thicket"?
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{{*mp}}... <s>that "'''[[White Foxes]]'''", the [[lead single]] of Norwegian singer-songwriter [[Susanne Sundfør]]'s 2012 album ''[[The Silicone Veil]]'', has been described  as "thick with mythology and dark as a nighttime thicket"?</s>
 
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:* [[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] The article is new enough, long enough, was nominated in time, and is neutral. So basically it checks out, but there are some minor issues I want sorted before passing. I don't find the original hook any interesting (and it needs an inline citation if approved), so I'd prefer the ALT hook, which is supported by an inline citation. I don't know if it is common practice in song-articles, but I would like you to rewrite some of the paraphrasing into prose, like the sectios about Pitchfork media and Daniel D'amour. [[User:Mentoz86|Mentoz86]] ([[User talk:Mentoz86|talk]]) 08:16, 21 June 2013 (UTC)
 
:* [[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] The article is new enough, long enough, was nominated in time, and is neutral. So basically it checks out, but there are some minor issues I want sorted before passing. I don't find the original hook any interesting (and it needs an inline citation if approved), so I'd prefer the ALT hook, which is supported by an inline citation. I don't know if it is common practice in song-articles, but I would like you to rewrite some of the paraphrasing into prose, like the sectios about Pitchfork media and Daniel D'amour. [[User:Mentoz86|Mentoz86]] ([[User talk:Mentoz86|talk]]) 08:16, 21 June 2013 (UTC)
 
::*Thanks for reviewing. I have trimmed/converted the two sections you referred to to prose. I am fine with the alt hook being promoted. Let me know if there is anything else (I am also new to song articles). '''[[User:Ruby2010|<font color="003B48" size="2px">Ruby</font>]]''' [[User talk:Ruby2010|<font color="maroon " size="2px">2010/</font>]][[Special:Contributions/Ruby2010|<font color="maroon " size="2px">2013</font>]] 19:58, 22 June 2013 (UTC)
 
::*Thanks for reviewing. I have trimmed/converted the two sections you referred to to prose. I am fine with the alt hook being promoted. Let me know if there is anything else (I am also new to song articles). '''[[User:Ruby2010|<font color="003B48" size="2px">Ruby</font>]]''' [[User talk:Ruby2010|<font color="maroon " size="2px">2010/</font>]][[Special:Contributions/Ruby2010|<font color="maroon " size="2px">2013</font>]] 19:58, 22 June 2013 (UTC)
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:::*[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] Great, the ALT-hook is good to go. Good job. [[User:Mentoz86|Mentoz86]] ([[User talk:Mentoz86|talk]]) 09:31, 25 June 2013 (UTC)
  
 
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Revision as of 09:31, 25 June 2013

White Foxes

Created by Ruby2010 (talk). Self nominated at 19:16, 17 June 2013 (UTC).

  • Symbol question.svg The article is new enough, long enough, was nominated in time, and is neutral. So basically it checks out, but there are some minor issues I want sorted before passing. I don't find the original hook any interesting (and it needs an inline citation if approved), so I'd prefer the ALT hook, which is supported by an inline citation. I don't know if it is common practice in song-articles, but I would like you to rewrite some of the paraphrasing into prose, like the sectios about Pitchfork media and Daniel D'amour. Mentoz86 (talk) 08:16, 21 June 2013 (UTC)
  • Thanks for reviewing. I have trimmed/converted the two sections you referred to to prose. I am fine with the alt hook being promoted. Let me know if there is anything else (I am also new to song articles). Ruby 2010/2013 19:58, 22 June 2013 (UTC)
  • Symbol confirmed.svg Great, the ALT-hook is good to go. Good job. Mentoz86 (talk) 09:31, 25 June 2013 (UTC)