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:* I have not reviewed the article, but I have concerns about the effectiveness of the proposed hook. It's too vague, and it focuses too much on the non-target article. I suggest the following revision:
 
:* I have not reviewed the article, but I have concerns about the effectiveness of the proposed hook. It's too vague, and it focuses too much on the non-target article. I suggest the following revision:
 
::*'''ALT1''' ...that the first '''[[White Wonderland]]''' music festival was held on the same night as a [[Together as One (festival)|competing festival]] that its [[Insomniac Events|sponsor]] had co-organized? --[[User:Orlady|Orlady]] ([[User talk:Orlady|talk]]) 16:08, 26 July 2013 (UTC)
 
::*'''ALT1''' ...that the first '''[[White Wonderland]]''' music festival was held on the same night as a [[Together as One (festival)|competing festival]] that its [[Insomniac Events|sponsor]] had co-organized? --[[User:Orlady|Orlady]] ([[User talk:Orlady|talk]]) 16:08, 26 July 2013 (UTC)
 
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:::*I'm okay with it if it says "previously co-organized", and if "same night" is linked to [[New Year's Eve]] (because that's a key aspect of why this makes sense). <span style="border:1px solid #f57900;padding:1px;"><font style="color:#8f5902">[[User:ViperSnake151|ViperSnake151]]</font> [[User_talk:ViperSnake151|<font style="color:#fff;background:#fcaf3e;">&nbsp;Talk&nbsp;</font>]] </span> 16:17, 26 July 2013 (UTC)
 
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White Wonderland

Created by ViperSnake151 (talk). Self nominated at 01:53, 26 July 2013 (UTC).

  • I have not reviewed the article, but I have concerns about the effectiveness of the proposed hook. It's too vague, and it focuses too much on the non-target article. I suggest the following revision:
  • I'm okay with it if it says "previously co-organized", and if "same night" is linked to New Year's Eve (because that's a key aspect of why this makes sense). ViperSnake151  Talk  16:17, 26 July 2013 (UTC)