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::::::*I found close paraphrasing under Music video; the line "''the singer is seen perched in front of picturesque waterfalls and exotic greenery, doused in gold glitter, with sparkling butterfly wings on her bare back, and some serious cleavage''" is lifted straight from the source in footnote 29. I am unable to check footnote 28, as it is not viewable outside the US; maybe you can verify that there is no close paraphrasing there. | ::::::*I found close paraphrasing under Music video; the line "''the singer is seen perched in front of picturesque waterfalls and exotic greenery, doused in gold glitter, with sparkling butterfly wings on her bare back, and some serious cleavage''" is lifted straight from the source in footnote 29. I am unable to check footnote 28, as it is not viewable outside the US; maybe you can verify that there is no close paraphrasing there. | ||
::::::*I also have a question about the sourcing; footnotes 3, 4, 5, 6, and 7 are all the same webpage, and footnotes 11 and 12 are also the same URL. Can these be amalgamated into one ref? [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 01:13, 11 March 2014 (UTC) | ::::::*I also have a question about the sourcing; footnotes 3, 4, 5, 6, and 7 are all the same webpage, and footnotes 11 and 12 are also the same URL. Can these be amalgamated into one ref? [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 01:13, 11 March 2014 (UTC) | ||
| − | ::::::: | + | :::::::*They are not the same URL. They are different countries' versions of the website. They are de facto different websites.--<span style="background:#FF0;font-family:Rockwell Extra Bold">[[User:Launchballer|<font color="#00F">Laun</font>]][[User talk:Launchballer|<font color="#00F">chba</font>]][[Special:Contributions/Launchballer|<font color="#00F">ller</font>]]</span> 10:48, 11 March 2014 (UTC) |
| + | *[[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] Still waiting for QPQ and checking/correction of close paraphrasing. [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 23:22, 15 March 2014 (UTC) | ||
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You're Mine (Eternal)
... that the music video for Mariah Carey's new single "You're Mine (Eternal)" was shot at El Yunque National Forest in Puerto Rico?
Created by Fidelove (talk), Calvin999 (talk). Nominated by Calvin999 (talk) at 17:39, 14 February 2014 (UTC).
- The article is plenty long enough, but I endorse whoever placed the {{quotefarm}} tag on the article. Please fix that first, and come back here for more punishment. ;-) -- Ohc ¡digame! 12:07, 15 February 2014 (UTC)
- It was me who had placed that tag on the section. However, I see that it was removed by User:Fidelove who believed that he/she had fixed the issues. I can still see some quotes that are written as if its paraphrased, but its a copy from the source. —Indian:BIO · [ ChitChat ] 06:04, 17 February 2014 (UTC)
Perhaps I am looking at a different revision of the article to the one you are looking at, but I refute the inclusion of the {{quotefarm}} template. I say this is long enough, new enough, no copyvios found; QPQ not done. As for the hook, I would suggest something like this:- ALT1:
... that the music video for You're Mine (Eternal) is her second music video shot in Puerto Rico? - ...but it's your call.--Launchballer 21:53, 27 February 2014 (UTC)
- OKay. — ₳aron 11:09, 28 February 2014 (UTC)
- Whoops, that hook doesn't mention Carey and thus has no context.
- ALT2: ... that Mariah Carey's "You're Mine (Eternal)" is her second music video shot in Puerto Rico?
Hook review required.--Launchballer 08:37, 3 March 2014 (UTC)
Article is new enough and long enough. ALT2 hook ref verified and cited inline. Since Calvin999 has more than 5 DYKs, a QPQ should be done.- I found close paraphrasing under Music video; the line "the singer is seen perched in front of picturesque waterfalls and exotic greenery, doused in gold glitter, with sparkling butterfly wings on her bare back, and some serious cleavage" is lifted straight from the source in footnote 29. I am unable to check footnote 28, as it is not viewable outside the US; maybe you can verify that there is no close paraphrasing there.
- I also have a question about the sourcing; footnotes 3, 4, 5, 6, and 7 are all the same webpage, and footnotes 11 and 12 are also the same URL. Can these be amalgamated into one ref? Yoninah (talk) 01:13, 11 March 2014 (UTC)
- OKay. — ₳aron 11:09, 28 February 2014 (UTC)