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::: I've changed it but a tour is a form of promotional appearance. &nbsp;—&nbsp;[[User:Calvin999|<font color="#126180">₳aron</font>]] 09:06, 18 March 2015 (UTC)
 
::: I've changed it but a tour is a form of promotional appearance. &nbsp;—&nbsp;[[User:Calvin999|<font color="#126180">₳aron</font>]] 09:06, 18 March 2015 (UTC)
 
::::[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] Yes, but the opposite is not true: there are more types of promotional appearances than tours. Revised hook is fine. [[User:AHeneen|AHeneen]] ([[User talk:AHeneen|talk]]) 09:33, 18 March 2015 (UTC)
 
::::[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] Yes, but the opposite is not true: there are more types of promotional appearances than tours. Revised hook is fine. [[User:AHeneen|AHeneen]] ([[User talk:AHeneen|talk]]) 09:33, 18 March 2015 (UTC)
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:::::*[[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] {{ping|Aheneen}} please note if you checked the article for copyvio or close paraphrasing. The phrasing of the hook fact in the article is very close to the source. [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 20:09, 25 March 2015 (UTC)
 
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Revision as of 20:09, 25 March 2015

1000 Forms of Fear

A photo of Sia performing in Seattle

  • ... that Australian recording artist Sia (pictured) agreed to release 1000 Forms of Fear on the condition that she was not obligated to do a tour or press appearances?

Improved to Good Article status by (talk). Nominated by Calvin999 (talk) at 11:04, 16 March 2015 (UTC).

16px Promoted to GA on 16 March, long enough, QPQ verified, and image is fine. Hook is 172 characters. However, the article says she "signed a contract that would stipulate she doesn't have to tour or do press appearances to promote the album." The source says the same, so I think "promotional appearances" should not be mentioned in the hook (again, only tour and press appearances were mentioned in source & article) and possibly replaced with "tour". AHeneen (talk) 03:58, 18 March 2015 (UTC)
I've changed it but a tour is a form of promotional appearance.  — ₳aron 09:06, 18 March 2015 (UTC)
16px Yes, but the opposite is not true: there are more types of promotional appearances than tours. Revised hook is fine. AHeneen (talk) 09:33, 18 March 2015 (UTC)
  • 16px Template:Ping please note if you checked the article for copyvio or close paraphrasing. The phrasing of the hook fact in the article is very close to the source. Yoninah (talk) 20:09, 25 March 2015 (UTC)