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:::'''ALT 1''':...that in 1951, a [[1951 Hawaii cyclone|cyclone]] made [[landfall (meteorology)|landfall]] in [[Hawaii]] three times?
 
:::'''ALT 1''':...that in 1951, a [[1951 Hawaii cyclone|cyclone]] made [[landfall (meteorology)|landfall]] in [[Hawaii]] three times?
 
:::&mdash;[[User:CycloneIsaac|<font face="Courier New" color="#5C5C33">CycloneIsaac</font>]] ([[User talk:CycloneIsaac|<font face="Courier New" color="#5C5C33">Talk</font>]]) 20:56, 29 June 2014 (UTC)
 
:::&mdash;[[User:CycloneIsaac|<font face="Courier New" color="#5C5C33">CycloneIsaac</font>]] ([[User talk:CycloneIsaac|<font face="Courier New" color="#5C5C33">Talk</font>]]) 20:56, 29 June 2014 (UTC)
 
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::::*Thank you. What about my question about the statistical data? [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 21:34, 29 June 2014 (UTC)
 
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1951 Hawaii cyclone

  • Comment: Going to review another DYK, even though I don't have to QPQ. (Start training :P)

Moved to mainspace by CycloneIsaac (talk). Self nominated at 21:36, 11 June 2014 (UTC).

  • Symbol question.svg New enough, long enough, adequately referenced, no close paraphrasing seen. I'm wondering, though, where you got all that information in the first paragraph under Meteorological history – are you interpreting the statistical charts in footnotes 2 and 3? Per DYK rules, you need to add a cite after the sentences describing the second and third landfalls. Also, I suggest adding "in 1951" to the hook to place it in context. No QPQ needed for under-5 DYKs nominator. Yoninah (talk) 20:31, 29 June 2014 (UTC)
  • I added a few more cites to footnotes 2 and 3 for the other two landfalls. I am proposing an alt hook, with your suggestion.
ALT 1:...that in 1951, a cyclone made landfall in Hawaii three times?
CycloneIsaac (Talk) 20:56, 29 June 2014 (UTC)
  • Thank you. What about my question about the statistical data? Yoninah (talk) 21:34, 29 June 2014 (UTC)