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:* Article new enough and long enough at time of nomination. I'm concerned about how the target article is laid out in the hook. It seems unlikely that a casual reader reading the hook would click on '''crashed'''. I would recommend rewording so that the main article is given preeminence. Also your QPQ is incomplete. You only mention checks for length and newness. A more thorough review needed. [[User:EagerToddler39|EagerToddler39]] ([[User talk:EagerToddler39|talk]]) 04:46, 26 January 2014 (UTC) | :* Article new enough and long enough at time of nomination. I'm concerned about how the target article is laid out in the hook. It seems unlikely that a casual reader reading the hook would click on '''crashed'''. I would recommend rewording so that the main article is given preeminence. Also your QPQ is incomplete. You only mention checks for length and newness. A more thorough review needed. [[User:EagerToddler39|EagerToddler39]] ([[User talk:EagerToddler39|talk]]) 04:46, 26 January 2014 (UTC) | ||
* '''ALT1''' ... that 46 Italian [[paratrooper]]s died in the '''[[1971 RAF Hercules crash]]''' aboard a [[Lockheed C-130 Hercules|British aircraft]]? | * '''ALT1''' ... that 46 Italian [[paratrooper]]s died in the '''[[1971 RAF Hercules crash]]''' aboard a [[Lockheed C-130 Hercules|British aircraft]]? | ||
| + | **Nope, no need to change anything, it's commonplace to link the "crashed" in this kind of blurb. And considering the article I've reviewed has already been closed, I don't consider anything here to be actionable. [[User:The Rambling Man|The Rambling Man]] ([[User talk:The Rambling Man|talk]]) 19:02, 2 February 2014 (UTC) | ||
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1971 RAF Hercules crash
- ... that 46 Italian paratroopers died in a Royal Air Force Lockheed C-130 Hercules which crashed off the Livorno coast in 1971?
Created by The Rambling Man (talk), MilborneOne (talk). Nominated by The Rambling Man (talk) at 22:08, 17 January 2014 (UTC).
- Reviewed Monument to Captain John Francis Egerton here. The Rambling Man (talk) 22:15, 17 January 2014 (UTC)
- Article new enough and long enough at time of nomination. I'm concerned about how the target article is laid out in the hook. It seems unlikely that a casual reader reading the hook would click on crashed. I would recommend rewording so that the main article is given preeminence. Also your QPQ is incomplete. You only mention checks for length and newness. A more thorough review needed. EagerToddler39 (talk) 04:46, 26 January 2014 (UTC)
- ALT1 ... that 46 Italian paratroopers died in the 1971 RAF Hercules crash aboard a British aircraft?
- Nope, no need to change anything, it's commonplace to link the "crashed" in this kind of blurb. And considering the article I've reviewed has already been closed, I don't consider anything here to be actionable. The Rambling Man (talk) 19:02, 2 February 2014 (UTC)
