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| − | * ... that 46 Italian [[paratrooper]]s died in a [[Royal Air Force]] [[Lockheed C-130 Hercules]] which '''[[1971 RAF Hercules crash|crashed]]''' off the [[Livorno]] coast in 1971? | + | * <s>... that 46 Italian [[paratrooper]]s died in a [[Royal Air Force]] [[Lockheed C-130 Hercules]] which '''[[1971 RAF Hercules crash|crashed]]''' off the [[Livorno]] coast in 1971?</s> |
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**Nope, no need to change anything, it's commonplace to link the "crashed" in this kind of blurb. And considering the nomination of the article I've reviewed has already been closed, I don't consider anything here to be actionable. [[User:The Rambling Man|The Rambling Man]] ([[User talk:The Rambling Man|talk]]) 19:02, 2 February 2014 (UTC) | **Nope, no need to change anything, it's commonplace to link the "crashed" in this kind of blurb. And considering the nomination of the article I've reviewed has already been closed, I don't consider anything here to be actionable. [[User:The Rambling Man|The Rambling Man]] ([[User talk:The Rambling Man|talk]]) 19:02, 2 February 2014 (UTC) | ||
***I prefer ALT1, as it's more concise and not overlinked. --<small><span style="background-color:#ffffff;border: 1px solid;">[[User:Ohconfucius|'''<span style="color:#000000; background-color:#00FF00"> Ohc </span>''']]</span></small>[[User talk:Ohconfucius|<sup>''¡digame!''</sup>]] 03:47, 4 February 2014 (UTC) | ***I prefer ALT1, as it's more concise and not overlinked. --<small><span style="background-color:#ffffff;border: 1px solid;">[[User:Ohconfucius|'''<span style="color:#000000; background-color:#00FF00"> Ohc </span>''']]</span></small>[[User talk:Ohconfucius|<sup>''¡digame!''</sup>]] 03:47, 4 February 2014 (UTC) | ||
| − | + | :*[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] New enough, long enough, well sourced, no copyvio problems. ALT1 is better; less cluttered and a more prominent link. I've struck the original. [[User:DoctorKubla|DoctorKubla]] ([[User talk:DoctorKubla|talk]]) 11:23, 6 February 2014 (UTC) | |
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1971 RAF Hercules crash
... that 46 Italian paratroopers died in a Royal Air Force Lockheed C-130 Hercules which crashed off the Livorno coast in 1971?
Created by The Rambling Man (talk), MilborneOne (talk). Nominated by The Rambling Man (talk) at 22:08, 17 January 2014 (UTC).
- Reviewed Monument to Captain John Francis Egerton here. The Rambling Man (talk) 22:15, 17 January 2014 (UTC)
- Article new enough and long enough at time of nomination. I'm concerned about how the target article is laid out in the hook. It seems unlikely that a casual reader reading the hook would click on crashed. I would recommend rewording so that the main article is given preeminence. Also your QPQ is incomplete. You only mention checks for length and newness. A more thorough review needed. EagerToddler39 (talk) 04:46, 26 January 2014 (UTC)
- ALT1 ... that 46 Italian paratroopers died in the 1971 RAF Hercules crash aboard a British aircraft?
- Nope, no need to change anything, it's commonplace to link the "crashed" in this kind of blurb. And considering the nomination of the article I've reviewed has already been closed, I don't consider anything here to be actionable. The Rambling Man (talk) 19:02, 2 February 2014 (UTC)
- 16px New enough, long enough, well sourced, no copyvio problems. ALT1 is better; less cluttered and a more prominent link. I've struck the original. DoctorKubla (talk) 11:23, 6 February 2014 (UTC)
