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====1971 RAF Hercules crash====
 
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* <s>... that 46 Italian [[paratrooper]]s died in a [[Royal Air Force]] [[Lockheed C-130 Hercules]] which '''[[1971 RAF Hercules crash|crashed]]''' off the [[Livorno]] coast in 1971?</s>
 
* <s>... that 46 Italian [[paratrooper]]s died in a [[Royal Air Force]] [[Lockheed C-130 Hercules]] which '''[[1971 RAF Hercules crash|crashed]]''' off the [[Livorno]] coast in 1971?</s>
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<small>Created by [[User:The Rambling Man|The Rambling Man]] ([[User talk:The Rambling Man|talk]]), [[User:MilborneOne|MilborneOne]] ([[User talk:MilborneOne|talk]]).&nbsp;Nominated by [[User:The Rambling Man|The Rambling Man]] ([[User talk:The Rambling Man|talk]]) at 22:08, 17 January 2014 (UTC)</small>.
 
<small>Created by [[User:The Rambling Man|The Rambling Man]] ([[User talk:The Rambling Man|talk]]), [[User:MilborneOne|MilborneOne]] ([[User talk:MilborneOne|talk]]).&nbsp;Nominated by [[User:The Rambling Man|The Rambling Man]] ([[User talk:The Rambling Man|talk]]) at 22:08, 17 January 2014 (UTC)</small>.
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:* Reviewed [[Monument to Captain John Francis Egerton]] [https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Template%3ADid_you_know_nominations%2FMonument_to_Captain_John_Francis_Egerton&diff=591182825&oldid=591169549 here].  [[User:The Rambling Man|The Rambling Man]] ([[User talk:The Rambling Man|talk]]) 22:15, 17 January 2014 (UTC)
 
:* Reviewed [[Monument to Captain John Francis Egerton]] [https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Template%3ADid_you_know_nominations%2FMonument_to_Captain_John_Francis_Egerton&diff=591182825&oldid=591169549 here].  [[User:The Rambling Man|The Rambling Man]] ([[User talk:The Rambling Man|talk]]) 22:15, 17 January 2014 (UTC)
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**Nope, no need to change anything, it's commonplace to link the "crashed" in this kind of blurb.  And considering the nomination of the article I've reviewed has already been closed, I don't consider anything here to be actionable.  [[User:The Rambling Man|The Rambling Man]] ([[User talk:The Rambling Man|talk]]) 19:02, 2 February 2014 (UTC)
 
**Nope, no need to change anything, it's commonplace to link the "crashed" in this kind of blurb.  And considering the nomination of the article I've reviewed has already been closed, I don't consider anything here to be actionable.  [[User:The Rambling Man|The Rambling Man]] ([[User talk:The Rambling Man|talk]]) 19:02, 2 February 2014 (UTC)
 
***I prefer ALT1, as it's more concise and not overlinked. --<small><span style="background-color:#ffffff;border: 1px solid;">[[User:Ohconfucius|'''<span style="color:#000000; background-color:#00FF00">&nbsp;Ohc&nbsp;</span>''']]</span></small>[[User talk:Ohconfucius|<sup>''¡digame!''</sup>]] 03:47, 4 February 2014 (UTC)
 
***I prefer ALT1, as it's more concise and not overlinked. --<small><span style="background-color:#ffffff;border: 1px solid;">[[User:Ohconfucius|'''<span style="color:#000000; background-color:#00FF00">&nbsp;Ohc&nbsp;</span>''']]</span></small>[[User talk:Ohconfucius|<sup>''¡digame!''</sup>]] 03:47, 4 February 2014 (UTC)
:*[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] New enough, long enough, well sourced, no copyvio problems. ALT1 is better; less cluttered and a more prominent link. I've struck the original. [[User:DoctorKubla|DoctorKubla]] ([[User talk:DoctorKubla|talk]]) 11:23, 6 February 2014 (UTC)
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:*[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] New enough, long enough, well sourced, no copyvio problems. ALT1 is better; less cluttered and a more prominent link. I've struck the original. [[User:DoctorKubla|DoctorKubla]] ([[User talk:DoctorKubla|talk]]) 11:23, 6 February 2014 (UTC){{#if:yes|</div></noinclude>|{{#ifeq:{{FULLPAGENAME}}|Template talk:Did you know/{{SUBPAGENAME}}|[[Category:Pending DYK nominations]][[Category:DYK/Nominations|Pending]]|{{#ifeq:{{FULLPAGENAME}}|Template:Did you know nominations/{{SUBPAGENAME}}|[[Category:DYK/Nominations|Pending]][[Category:Pending DYK nominations]]}}}}}}<!--Please do not write below this line or remove this line. Place comments above this line.-->
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Revision as of 14:15, 6 February 2014

The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Allen3 talk 14:15, 6 February 2014 (UTC)

1971 RAF Hercules crash

Created by The Rambling Man (talk), MilborneOne (talk). Nominated by The Rambling Man (talk) at 22:08, 17 January 2014 (UTC).

  • Reviewed Monument to Captain John Francis Egerton here. The Rambling Man (talk) 22:15, 17 January 2014 (UTC)
  • Article new enough and long enough at time of nomination. I'm concerned about how the target article is laid out in the hook. It seems unlikely that a casual reader reading the hook would click on crashed. I would recommend rewording so that the main article is given preeminence. Also your QPQ is incomplete. You only mention checks for length and newness. A more thorough review needed. EagerToddler39 (talk) 04:46, 26 January 2014 (UTC)
  • ALT1 ... that 46 Italian paratroopers died in the 1971 RAF Hercules crash aboard a British aircraft?
    • Nope, no need to change anything, it's commonplace to link the "crashed" in this kind of blurb. And considering the nomination of the article I've reviewed has already been closed, I don't consider anything here to be actionable. The Rambling Man (talk) 19:02, 2 February 2014 (UTC)
      • I prefer ALT1, as it's more concise and not overlinked. -- Ohc ¡digame! 03:47, 4 February 2014 (UTC)
  • Symbol confirmed.svg New enough, long enough, well sourced, no copyvio problems. ALT1 is better; less cluttered and a more prominent link. I've struck the original. DoctorKubla (talk) 11:23, 6 February 2014 (UTC)