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*'''ALT2''': ... that in the wake of the [[September 11 attacks]], the [[Federal Aviation Administration]] ordered a [[no-fly zone]] of {{convert|3|mi|km}} wide and {{convert|300|ft|m|abbv=yes}} high for the '''[[2001 Protection One 400]]'''?
 
*'''ALT2''': ... that in the wake of the [[September 11 attacks]], the [[Federal Aviation Administration]] ordered a [[no-fly zone]] of {{convert|3|mi|km}} wide and {{convert|300|ft|m|abbv=yes}} high for the '''[[2001 Protection One 400]]'''?
 
*'''ALT3''': ... that [[Jason Leffler]] won his first career [[NASCAR]] [[Sprint Cup Series|Winston Cup Series]] [[pole position]] at the '''[[2001 Protection One 400]]'''?
 
*'''ALT3''': ... that [[Jason Leffler]] won his first career [[NASCAR]] [[Sprint Cup Series|Winston Cup Series]] [[pole position]] at the '''[[2001 Protection One 400]]'''?
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*'''ALT4''': ... that the 13 cautions and 70 laps run under caution in the '''[[2001 Protection One 400]]''' were [[Kansas Speedway|track]] highs?
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*'''ALT5''': ... that [[John Andretti]] and [[Ricky Craven]] crashed on the first lap of the '''[[2001 Protection One 400]]'''?
  
 
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Revision as of 17:43, 6 August 2013

2001 Protection One 400

Created by ZappaOMati (talk). Self nominated at 04:25, 2 July 2013 (UTC).

  • Interesting hook and I think it could work with some more context. To someone who's not familiar with racing, I'm not sure if it would be self-evident that this was an auto race. Also, I don't believe "pit road" is a general knowledge term that non-fans would tend to know. CaseyPenk (talk) 17:43, 3 July 2013 (UTC)
  • I don't know about how self-evident it'd be, unless you go up to a random non-race fan and ask "did you watch the Blah 500?" or something. For pit road, I linked it, which could help people know what it is. ZappaOMati 19:52, 3 July 2013 (UTC)
  • I didn't review the article, but the hook looks self-evident enough. SL93 (talk) 02:17, 10 July 2013 (UTC)
  • I'm a little unsure a reader outside the US will be able to parse this quickly enough, though I worked out what it was talking about because "pit road" is contextually similar enough to "pit lane" as used in Formula 1 to understand it. Ritchie333 (talk) (cont) 10:02, 11 July 2013 (UTC)
  • The source uses the phrase "pit road speeding penalty". I think "pit road" should be used in the article rather than "pit lane", if that's the term of art used for NASCAR; I also think you need to use "the" in the article and hook sentences, i.e., "speeding on the pit road". Once these are addressed, we can call for a full review; I don't think it makes sense to ask for a reviewer when this issue is still a snag preventing approval. BlueMoonset (talk) 18:39, 28 July 2013 (UTC)
  • Template:Reply to I added "the" to the original hook though just in case, I provided extra hooks in the event that the original won't suffice. NFLisAwesome (ZappaOMati's alternate account) 17:41, 6 August 2013 (UTC)