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::"Riggs ran into [[Mark Martin]], and [[Kurt Busch]], [[Casey Mears]], [[Bobby Labonte]], and [[Matt Kenseth]] are among the drivers collected in the wreck. Riggs stated that McMurray did not signal to him that he would pit." is ungrammatical. That seems to be it. — [[User:Crisco 1492|Crisco 1492]] ([[User talk:Crisco 1492|talk]]) 09:31, 5 February 2013 (UTC) | ::"Riggs ran into [[Mark Martin]], and [[Kurt Busch]], [[Casey Mears]], [[Bobby Labonte]], and [[Matt Kenseth]] are among the drivers collected in the wreck. Riggs stated that McMurray did not signal to him that he would pit." is ungrammatical. That seems to be it. — [[User:Crisco 1492|Crisco 1492]] ([[User talk:Crisco 1492|talk]]) 09:31, 5 February 2013 (UTC) | ||
::*Although not mentioned here, a subsequent edit was made to this section on February 6. I'm not sure it was a sufficient improvement, however. Crisco? [[User:BlueMoonset|BlueMoonset]] ([[User talk:BlueMoonset|talk]]) 20:49, 17 February 2013 (UTC) | ::*Although not mentioned here, a subsequent edit was made to this section on February 6. I'm not sure it was a sufficient improvement, however. Crisco? [[User:BlueMoonset|BlueMoonset]] ([[User talk:BlueMoonset|talk]]) 20:49, 17 February 2013 (UTC) | ||
+ | :::* Woops, looks like I forgot to notify this about it. '''<span style="text-shadow:#808080 0.2em 0.2em 0.2em">[[User:ZappaOMati|<font color="#0000FF">Zappa</font>]][[Special:Contributions/ZappaOMati|<font color="#00FF00">O</font>]][[User talk:ZappaOMati|<font color="#FF0000">Mati</font>]]</span>''' 21:35, 17 February 2013 (UTC) | ||
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2005 Pepsi 400
- ... that Tony Stewart led a Pepsi 400 record of 151 laps in the 2005 Pepsi 400?
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Will do QPQ - Reviewed: Tim Breslin
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Created by ZappaOMati (talk). Self nom at 03:39, 11 January 2013 (UTC)
The very long single paragraph veers between past and present tense, and needs to be in past tense throughout. Might there be a way to break the material into more readable chunks? BlueMoonset (talk) 02:19, 17 January 2013 (UTC)
This is about the 2006 race, and yet it supports half the article. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 15:01, 31 January 2013 (UTC)
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- "Riggs ran into Mark Martin, and Kurt Busch, Casey Mears, Bobby Labonte, and Matt Kenseth are among the drivers collected in the wreck. Riggs stated that McMurray did not signal to him that he would pit." is ungrammatical. That seems to be it. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 09:31, 5 February 2013 (UTC)
- Although not mentioned here, a subsequent edit was made to this section on February 6. I'm not sure it was a sufficient improvement, however. Crisco? BlueMoonset (talk) 20:49, 17 February 2013 (UTC)
- "Riggs ran into Mark Martin, and Kurt Busch, Casey Mears, Bobby Labonte, and Matt Kenseth are among the drivers collected in the wreck. Riggs stated that McMurray did not signal to him that he would pit." is ungrammatical. That seems to be it. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 09:31, 5 February 2013 (UTC)