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− | * ... that the '''[[2009 All-SEC football team]]''' included two [[Heisman Trophy]] winners, [[Tim Tebow]] of Florida and [[Mark Ingram, Jr.]] of Alabama, as well as convicted murderer [[Aaron Hernandez]]? | + | * <s>... that the '''[[2009 All-SEC football team]]''' included two [[Heisman Trophy]] winners, [[Tim Tebow]] of Florida and [[Mark Ingram, Jr.]] of Alabama, as well as convicted murderer [[Aaron Hernandez]]?</s> |
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::*[[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] The hook is great, but misleading. He wasn't convicted of murder until 4 years ''after'' playing on the team. The hook makes it sound like he was a convicted murderer playing on the team. [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 19:15, 7 July 2015 (UTC) | ::*[[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] The hook is great, but misleading. He wasn't convicted of murder until 4 years ''after'' playing on the team. The hook makes it sound like he was a convicted murderer playing on the team. [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 19:15, 7 July 2015 (UTC) | ||
:::*It's a fair point. Not sure if I made it worse: | :::*It's a fair point. Not sure if I made it worse: | ||
− | :::*'''ALT1''': ... that the '''[[2009 All-SEC football team]]''' included two [[Heisman Trophy]] winners, [[Tim Tebow]] of Florida and [[Mark Ingram, Jr.]] of Alabama, as well as [[Aaron Hernandez]], who was later convicted of murder? [[User:MisterCake|Cake]] ([[User talk:MisterCake|talk]]) 19:21, 7 July 2015 (UTC) | + | :::*'''ALT1''': <s>... that the '''[[2009 All-SEC football team]]''' included two [[Heisman Trophy]] winners, [[Tim Tebow]] of Florida and [[Mark Ingram, Jr.]] of Alabama, as well as [[Aaron Hernandez]], who was later convicted of murder?</s> [[User:MisterCake|Cake]] ([[User talk:MisterCake|talk]]) 19:21, 7 July 2015 (UTC) |
::::*{{ping|MisterCake}} please do not edit the hooks, but provide a new ALT so editors can see the history of the discussion. I restored the original hook and listed your ALT as ALT1. I don't think ALT1 is bad, it just lacks that punch. [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 21:02, 7 July 2015 (UTC) | ::::*{{ping|MisterCake}} please do not edit the hooks, but provide a new ALT so editors can see the history of the discussion. I restored the original hook and listed your ALT as ALT1. I don't think ALT1 is bad, it just lacks that punch. [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 21:02, 7 July 2015 (UTC) | ||
:::::*I do apologize. This nom-article seems to have demonstrated well how I learn through error. Perhaps "future convicted murderer" is better. [[User:MisterCake|Cake]] ([[User talk:MisterCake|talk]]) 22:51, 7 July 2015 (UTC) | :::::*I do apologize. This nom-article seems to have demonstrated well how I learn through error. Perhaps "future convicted murderer" is better. [[User:MisterCake|Cake]] ([[User talk:MisterCake|talk]]) 22:51, 7 July 2015 (UTC) | ||
+ | ::::::*Yes, that works! Here is the new alt: | ||
+ | ::::::*'''ALT2''': ... that the '''[[2009 All-SEC football team]]''' included two [[Heisman Trophy]] winners, [[Tim Tebow]] of Florida and [[Mark Ingram, Jr.]] of Alabama, and future convicted murderer [[Aaron Hernandez]]? | ||
+ | ::::::*[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] ALT2 hook refs verified and cited inline. ALT2 good to go. [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 10:02, 8 July 2015 (UTC) | ||
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2009 All-SEC football team
... that the 2009 All-SEC football team included two Heisman Trophy winners, Tim Tebow of Florida and Mark Ingram, Jr. of Alabama, as well as convicted murderer Aaron Hernandez?
Created by MisterCake (talk). Self-nominated at 20:57, 4 June 2015 (UTC).
This article lacks the inline citations required by DYK to back up the hook facts. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:49, 29 June 2015 (UTC)
This article is new enough and long enough. The hook facts are now sourced with inline citations (although #1 does not work for me). The article is neutral and I found no close paraphrasing. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:32, 7 July 2015 (UTC)
The hook is great, but misleading. He wasn't convicted of murder until 4 years after playing on the team. The hook makes it sound like he was a convicted murderer playing on the team. Yoninah (talk) 19:15, 7 July 2015 (UTC)
- It's a fair point. Not sure if I made it worse:
- ALT1:
... that the 2009 All-SEC football team included two Heisman Trophy winners, Tim Tebow of Florida and Mark Ingram, Jr. of Alabama, as well as Aaron Hernandez, who was later convicted of murder?Cake (talk) 19:21, 7 July 2015 (UTC)
- Template:Ping please do not edit the hooks, but provide a new ALT so editors can see the history of the discussion. I restored the original hook and listed your ALT as ALT1. I don't think ALT1 is bad, it just lacks that punch. Yoninah (talk) 21:02, 7 July 2015 (UTC)
- I do apologize. This nom-article seems to have demonstrated well how I learn through error. Perhaps "future convicted murderer" is better. Cake (talk) 22:51, 7 July 2015 (UTC)
- Yes, that works! Here is the new alt:
- ALT2: ... that the 2009 All-SEC football team included two Heisman Trophy winners, Tim Tebow of Florida and Mark Ingram, Jr. of Alabama, and future convicted murderer Aaron Hernandez?
ALT2 hook refs verified and cited inline. ALT2 good to go. Yoninah (talk) 10:02, 8 July 2015 (UTC)