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* ... that the '''[[2009 All-SEC football team]]''' included two [[Heisman Trophy]] winners, [[Tim Tebow]] of Florida and [[Mark Ingram, Jr.]] of Alabama, as well as convicted murderer [[Aaron Hernandez]]?
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* <s>... that the '''[[2009 All-SEC football team]]''' included two [[Heisman Trophy]] winners, [[Tim Tebow]] of Florida and [[Mark Ingram, Jr.]] of Alabama, as well as convicted murderer [[Aaron Hernandez]]?</s>
  
 
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::*[[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] The hook is great, but misleading. He wasn't convicted of murder until 4 years ''after'' playing on the team. The hook makes it sound like he was a convicted murderer playing on the team. [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 19:15, 7 July 2015 (UTC)
 
::*[[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] The hook is great, but misleading. He wasn't convicted of murder until 4 years ''after'' playing on the team. The hook makes it sound like he was a convicted murderer playing on the team. [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 19:15, 7 July 2015 (UTC)
 
:::*It's a fair point. Not sure if I made it worse:
 
:::*It's a fair point. Not sure if I made it worse:
:::*'''ALT1''': ... that the '''[[2009 All-SEC football team]]''' included two [[Heisman Trophy]] winners, [[Tim Tebow]] of Florida and [[Mark Ingram, Jr.]] of Alabama, as well as [[Aaron Hernandez]], who was later convicted of murder? [[User:MisterCake|Cake]] ([[User talk:MisterCake|talk]]) 19:21, 7 July 2015 (UTC)
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:::*'''ALT1''': <s>... that the '''[[2009 All-SEC football team]]''' included two [[Heisman Trophy]] winners, [[Tim Tebow]] of Florida and [[Mark Ingram, Jr.]] of Alabama, as well as [[Aaron Hernandez]], who was later convicted of murder?</s> [[User:MisterCake|Cake]] ([[User talk:MisterCake|talk]]) 19:21, 7 July 2015 (UTC)
 
::::*{{ping|MisterCake}} please do not edit the hooks, but provide a new ALT so editors can see the history of the discussion. I restored the original hook and listed your ALT as ALT1. I don't think ALT1 is bad, it just lacks that punch. [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 21:02, 7 July 2015 (UTC)
 
::::*{{ping|MisterCake}} please do not edit the hooks, but provide a new ALT so editors can see the history of the discussion. I restored the original hook and listed your ALT as ALT1. I don't think ALT1 is bad, it just lacks that punch. [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 21:02, 7 July 2015 (UTC)
 
:::::*I do apologize. This nom-article seems to have demonstrated well how I learn through error. Perhaps "future convicted murderer" is better. [[User:MisterCake|Cake]] ([[User talk:MisterCake|talk]]) 22:51, 7 July 2015 (UTC)
 
:::::*I do apologize. This nom-article seems to have demonstrated well how I learn through error. Perhaps "future convicted murderer" is better. [[User:MisterCake|Cake]] ([[User talk:MisterCake|talk]]) 22:51, 7 July 2015 (UTC)
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::::::*Yes, that works! Here is the new alt:
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::::::*'''ALT2''': ... that the '''[[2009 All-SEC football team]]''' included two [[Heisman Trophy]] winners, [[Tim Tebow]] of Florida and [[Mark Ingram, Jr.]] of Alabama, and future convicted murderer [[Aaron Hernandez]]?
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::::::*[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] ALT2 hook refs verified and cited inline. ALT2 good to go. [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 10:02, 8 July 2015 (UTC)
 
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Revision as of 10:02, 8 July 2015

2009 All-SEC football team

Created by MisterCake (talk). Self-nominated at 20:57, 4 June 2015 (UTC).

  • Symbol possible vote.svg This article lacks the inline citations required by DYK to back up the hook facts. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:49, 29 June 2015 (UTC)
    • Fixed. Cake (talk) 21:17, 6 July 2015 (UTC)
  • Symbol confirmed.svg This article is new enough and long enough. The hook facts are now sourced with inline citations (although #1 does not work for me). The article is neutral and I found no close paraphrasing. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:32, 7 July 2015 (UTC)
  • Symbol question.svg The hook is great, but misleading. He wasn't convicted of murder until 4 years after playing on the team. The hook makes it sound like he was a convicted murderer playing on the team. Yoninah (talk) 19:15, 7 July 2015 (UTC)
  • Template:Ping please do not edit the hooks, but provide a new ALT so editors can see the history of the discussion. I restored the original hook and listed your ALT as ALT1. I don't think ALT1 is bad, it just lacks that punch. Yoninah (talk) 21:02, 7 July 2015 (UTC)
  • I do apologize. This nom-article seems to have demonstrated well how I learn through error. Perhaps "future convicted murderer" is better. Cake (talk) 22:51, 7 July 2015 (UTC)