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The result was: '''promoted''' by [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 14:29, 7 December 2014 (UTC)<br />
 
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====A. William Schorger====
 
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* ... that [[ornithology|ornithologist]] and professor of wildlife management '''[[A. William Schorger]]''' once worked as a chemist for the [[Internal Revenue Service|Bureau of Internal Revenue]]?
 
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<small>5x expanded by [[User:Teemu08|Teemu08]] ([[User talk:Teemu08|talk]]). Self nominated at 19:23, 6 November 2014 (UTC)</small>.
 
<small>5x expanded by [[User:Teemu08|Teemu08]] ([[User talk:Teemu08|talk]]). Self nominated at 19:23, 6 November 2014 (UTC)</small>.
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:* [[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] 5x Expansion verified. Length verified.  Hook verified. Largely free of close paraphrasing. A few sentences/strings are a bit close with the pdf source ref [1]: "he soon was found to have an inoperable cancer of the bladder" "he joined the american ornithologists union", "bequest for its upkeep". These should be rephrased. I also saw in the pdf source that "His collecting a Brown Pelican on Lake Mendota in 1943 was a shock from which the Madison Audubon Society did not recover for years." I wonder if an ALT1 hook based on that wouldn't be a more interesting one. Btw, currently the article does not have the Pelikan information but it could be added to it and an ALT1 could be created based on it. [[User:Dr.K.|Δρ.Κ.]]&nbsp;<small><sup style="position:relative">[[User talk:Dr.K.|λόγος]]<span style="position:relative;bottom:-2.0ex;left:-5.5ex;*left:-5.5ex">[[Special:Contributions/Dr.K.|πράξις]]</span></sup></small> 20:23, 7 November 2014 (UTC)
 
:* [[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] 5x Expansion verified. Length verified.  Hook verified. Largely free of close paraphrasing. A few sentences/strings are a bit close with the pdf source ref [1]: "he soon was found to have an inoperable cancer of the bladder" "he joined the american ornithologists union", "bequest for its upkeep". These should be rephrased. I also saw in the pdf source that "His collecting a Brown Pelican on Lake Mendota in 1943 was a shock from which the Madison Audubon Society did not recover for years." I wonder if an ALT1 hook based on that wouldn't be a more interesting one. Btw, currently the article does not have the Pelikan information but it could be added to it and an ALT1 could be created based on it. [[User:Dr.K.|Δρ.Κ.]]&nbsp;<small><sup style="position:relative">[[User talk:Dr.K.|λόγος]]<span style="position:relative;bottom:-2.0ex;left:-5.5ex;*left:-5.5ex">[[Special:Contributions/Dr.K.|πράξις]]</span></sup></small> 20:23, 7 November 2014 (UTC)
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:::*ALT1 is acceptable but needs to be cited directly in the article. Also, my concerns above about paraphrasing should be addressed before this DYK passes. [[User:Dr.K.|Δρ.Κ.]]&nbsp;<small><sup style="position:relative">[[User talk:Dr.K.|λόγος]]<span style="position:relative;bottom:-2.0ex;left:-5.5ex;*left:-5.5ex">[[Special:Contributions/Dr.K.|πράξις]]</span></sup></small> 04:19, 29 November 2014 (UTC)
 
:::*ALT1 is acceptable but needs to be cited directly in the article. Also, my concerns above about paraphrasing should be addressed before this DYK passes. [[User:Dr.K.|Δρ.Κ.]]&nbsp;<small><sup style="position:relative">[[User talk:Dr.K.|λόγος]]<span style="position:relative;bottom:-2.0ex;left:-5.5ex;*left:-5.5ex">[[Special:Contributions/Dr.K.|πράξις]]</span></sup></small> 04:19, 29 November 2014 (UTC)
 
::::{{ping|Dr.K}} I have corrected the close paraphrasing. The intended alternative hook is now also cited in the text. [[User:Teemu08|Teemu08]] ([[User talk:Teemu08|talk]]) 15:38, 4 December 2014 (UTC)
 
::::{{ping|Dr.K}} I have corrected the close paraphrasing. The intended alternative hook is now also cited in the text. [[User:Teemu08|Teemu08]] ([[User talk:Teemu08|talk]]) 15:38, 4 December 2014 (UTC)
:::::[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]]. Good to go. <small>By the way ping doesn't work in template space. :)</small> [[User:Dr.K.|Δρ.Κ.]]&nbsp;<small><sup style="position:relative">[[User talk:Dr.K.|λόγος]]<span style="position:relative;bottom:-2.0ex;left:-5.5ex;*left:-5.5ex">[[Special:Contributions/Dr.K.|πράξις]]</span></sup></small> 01:53, 6 December 2014 (UTC)
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:::::[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]]. Good to go. <small>By the way ping doesn't work in template space. :)</small> [[User:Dr.K.|Δρ.Κ.]]&nbsp;<small><sup style="position:relative">[[User talk:Dr.K.|λόγος]]<span style="position:relative;bottom:-2.0ex;left:-5.5ex;*left:-5.5ex">[[Special:Contributions/Dr.K.|πράξις]]</span></sup></small> 01:53, 6 December 2014 (UTC)</div></noinclude><!--Please do not write below this line or remove this line. Place comments above this line.-->
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Latest revision as of 14:29, 7 December 2014

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 14:29, 7 December 2014 (UTC)

A. William Schorger

5x expanded by Teemu08 (talk). Self nominated at 19:23, 6 November 2014 (UTC).

  • Symbol question.svg 5x Expansion verified. Length verified. Hook verified. Largely free of close paraphrasing. A few sentences/strings are a bit close with the pdf source ref [1]: "he soon was found to have an inoperable cancer of the bladder" "he joined the american ornithologists union", "bequest for its upkeep". These should be rephrased. I also saw in the pdf source that "His collecting a Brown Pelican on Lake Mendota in 1943 was a shock from which the Madison Audubon Society did not recover for years." I wonder if an ALT1 hook based on that wouldn't be a more interesting one. Btw, currently the article does not have the Pelikan information but it could be added to it and an ALT1 could be created based on it. Δρ.Κ. λόγοςπράξις 20:23, 7 November 2014 (UTC)
Added ALT1 for you. --George Ho (talk) 05:54, 11 November 2014 (UTC)
  • ALT1 is acceptable but needs to be cited directly in the article. Also, my concerns above about paraphrasing should be addressed before this DYK passes. Δρ.Κ. λόγοςπράξις 04:19, 29 November 2014 (UTC)
Template:Ping I have corrected the close paraphrasing. The intended alternative hook is now also cited in the text. Teemu08 (talk) 15:38, 4 December 2014 (UTC)
Symbol confirmed.svg. Good to go. By the way ping doesn't work in template space. :) Δρ.Κ. λόγοςπράξις 01:53, 6 December 2014 (UTC)