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*[[File:Symbol redirect vote 4.svg|16px]] Full review needed; previous posts were just commentary. [[User:BlueMoonset|BlueMoonset]] ([[User talk:BlueMoonset|talk]]) 02:05, 23 May 2019 (UTC)
 
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*[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] It's new enough (nominated on April 30, created on April 26); long enough (~4,300 bytes total, ~2,300 bytes of prose); is within all major policies, with citations; the hook length is OK, its contents are interesting to a general readership; the hook is appropriately cited and neutral; and the QPQ checks out. This is ready to go. —[[User:Brandt Luke Zorn|BLZ]] · [[User talk:Brandt Luke Zorn|talk]] 22:38, 23 May 2019 (UTC)
  
 
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Revision as of 22:38, 23 May 2019

A Colour Box

Created by Hinnk (talk). Self-nominated at 23:41, 30 April 2019 (UTC).

  • Symbol question.svgWould the following hook be preferable: ... that Nazis protested a 1936 screening of Len Lye's abstract animation A Colour Box and called it degenerate art? I am suggesting this to avoid the passive tense and add a little more context. I am terrible at DYK reviews and hooks though so I understand if you would prefer the original. I just wanted to offer a suggestion. Aoba47 (talk) 04:04, 3 May 2019 (UTC)
  • I'd be fine with that. To me it reads better without "and called it degenerate art" because then the hook is that an abstract animation could hold something worthy of protest, but either phrasing would be totally cool with me. hinnk (talk) 05:55, 3 May 2019 (UTC)
  • I struck that part and again, it is only a suggestion. Aoba47 (talk) 10:56, 3 May 2019 (UTC)
  • Symbol redirect vote 4.svg Full review needed; previous posts were just commentary. BlueMoonset (talk) 02:05, 23 May 2019 (UTC)
  • Symbol confirmed.svg It's new enough (nominated on April 30, created on April 26); long enough (~4,300 bytes total, ~2,300 bytes of prose); is within all major policies, with citations; the hook length is OK, its contents are interesting to a general readership; the hook is appropriately cited and neutral; and the QPQ checks out. This is ready to go. —BLZ · talk 22:38, 23 May 2019 (UTC)