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:* '''ALT1''':... that '''''[[A Kitty Bobo Show]]''''' was optioned by [[The Walt Disney Company]] before being turned down and accepted by [[Cartoon Network]]?
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:* <s>'''ALT1''':... that '''''[[A Kitty Bobo Show]]''''' was optioned by [[The Walt Disney Company]] before being turned down and accepted by [[Cartoon Network]]?</s>
 
:* ''Reviewed'': [[Template:Did you know nominations/La fille aux cheveux de lin|La fille aux cheveux de lin]]
 
:* ''Reviewed'': [[Template:Did you know nominations/La fille aux cheveux de lin|La fille aux cheveux de lin]]
 
:* ''Comment'': Looking to get this reviewed in the week before Meaghan Dunn's (the co-creator's) [https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/195262006/chloe-and-the-stars Kickstarter] is ended.
 
:* ''Comment'': Looking to get this reviewed in the week before Meaghan Dunn's (the co-creator's) [https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/195262006/chloe-and-the-stars Kickstarter] is ended.
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''Unrelated to this review'', however... I'm concerned that the linked article [[Korean adoptee]] is a bit, er, rambling -- and why don't we have 250 articles: "Russian adoptee", "German adoptee", "Mexican adoptee", "US adoptee" and so on? [[User:EEng|EEng]] ([[User talk:EEng|talk]]) 23:11, 23 August 2014 (UTC)
 
''Unrelated to this review'', however... I'm concerned that the linked article [[Korean adoptee]] is a bit, er, rambling -- and why don't we have 250 articles: "Russian adoptee", "German adoptee", "Mexican adoptee", "US adoptee" and so on? [[User:EEng|EEng]] ([[User talk:EEng|talk]]) 23:11, 23 August 2014 (UTC)
 
: Tweaked the hook to encompass both creators. [[User:23W|23]][[User talk:23W|<span style="color:hsl(345,100%,25%);display:inline-block;transform:rotate(168deg);text-decoration:underline;">W</span>]] 23:28, 23 August 2014 (UTC)
 
: Tweaked the hook to encompass both creators. [[User:23W|23]][[User talk:23W|<span style="color:hsl(345,100%,25%);display:inline-block;transform:rotate(168deg);text-decoration:underline;">W</span>]] 23:28, 23 August 2014 (UTC)
::Stop tweaking the titulars or I'm gonna report you. [[User:EEng|EEng]] ([[User talk:EEng|talk]]) 00:02, 24 August 2014 (UTC)
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::[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]]Still GTG. [[User:EEng|EEng]] ([[User talk:EEng|talk]]) 00:02, 24 August 2014 (UTC) <small>Stop tweaking the titulars or I'm gonna report you.</small>
 
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Revision as of 00:05, 24 August 2014

A Kitty Bobo Show

  • ... that the titular character of A Kitty Bobo Show was based the creators' experiences as Korean adoptees?

Moved to mainspace by 23W (talk). Self nominated at 05:00, 22 August 2014 (UTC).

  • WP:NOTCENSORED notwithstanding, I don't think the hook should refer to a character's titulars, especially what with this being a children's cartoon and all. EEng (talk) 23:26, 22 August 2014 (UTC)
    • hehe. Fixed. 23W 23:39, 22 August 2014 (UTC)
ALT2 ... that the eponymous character of A Kitty Bobo Show was based on one of the co-creator's experience as a Korean adoptee?
I didn't really think anything needed changing -- I just like being naughty. I think title character would be fine too. EEng (talk) 00:39, 23 August 2014 (UTC)
  • Yeah, but you're right that it sounds a bit lewd. Unless you think that would drive people to click... 23W 02:52, 23 August 2014 (UTC)
Both, though the word I would have used is titillating. EEng (talk) 13:23, 23 August 2014 (UTC)

Template:Ping Thanks for the laughs. If you're not busy, do you think you'd be able to give this a full review? I'd like to get this in the prep within the week as the Kickstarter is close to a week from ending; I know about WP:NOTADVERTISING and all, but I think it'd be a bummer to have this run too late. 23W 21:18, 23 August 2014 (UTC)

Ouch. I hate to tell you this, but from what I can see this article is nowhere near the 5X requirement. Am I mixed up? If I am, what are the "before" and "after" dates for the expansion? Right now I'm seeing about 2X from May until now. EEng (talk) 21:56, 23 August 2014 (UTC)
Naw, this was moved from my userspace. 23W 22:04, 23 August 2014 (UTC)
Wait a minute. Hold on. I'm all confused now. Just a sec while I check. EEng (talk) 22:35, 23 August 2014 (UTC)
It was moved with this edit. 23W 22:38, 23 August 2014 (UTC)

Template:Od Symbol confirmed.svg I had lost my mind for a minute there -- I think I was looking at the wrong change history. Anyway... NewlongcitesnoBLPnocopyvio. The hook cites to a source which gives --

Kitty Bobo's creators -- Kevin Kaliher and his wife Meaghan Dunn-Kaliher -- are both Korean adoptees. Kevin Kaliher says that much of the impetus for Kitty Bobo came while traveling in Korea in search of his birth family.

--and I think it's reasonable to interpret that as the hook's "based on one of the co-creator's experience as a Korean adoptee". Clear for takeoff. (Before anyone notices and makes a fuss, please cite the Synopsis section i.e. cite the pilot episode itself.)

Unrelated to this review, however... I'm concerned that the linked article Korean adoptee is a bit, er, rambling -- and why don't we have 250 articles: "Russian adoptee", "German adoptee", "Mexican adoptee", "US adoptee" and so on? EEng (talk) 23:11, 23 August 2014 (UTC)

Tweaked the hook to encompass both creators. 23W 23:28, 23 August 2014 (UTC)
Symbol confirmed.svgStill GTG. EEng (talk) 00:02, 24 August 2014 (UTC) Stop tweaking the titulars or I'm gonna report you.