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| − | :* | + | :* [[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] Hello. On the hook, consider whether this format would be more interesting: |
| + | :: ... that Kashmiri politician '''[[Abdul Sattar Ranjoor]]''' was also a famous poet and was assassinated by militants at age 73? | ||
| + | ::* On the review criteria: | ||
| + | :::- New - Yes, the article was created on May 1 | ||
| + | :::- Long enough – Yes, the prose portion is 1,576 characters | ||
| + | :::- is neutral - Yes, although it would be better to specify a specific group rather than "militants" | ||
| + | :::- cites sources with inline citations - Yes | ||
| + | :::- is free of close paraphrasing issues, copyright violations and plagiarism - yes for the sources I could access | ||
| + | ::: - Hook - is 112 characters (suggested alternate is 128 characters) | ||
| + | :::- Hook facts - they all are cited | ||
| + | :::- QPQ – ??? (sorry, I have not figured out how to tell this yet) | ||
| + | ::* Fact checking the article: | ||
| + | :::* NB sources 1, 3, 4, 6 and 11 are not available online so I have not been able to check against them and source 8 is viewable but would not show for me (source 8 is important because it alleges fraud on the part of his opponent's party) | ||
| + | :::* source 2 says party's founding secretary, not state secretary | ||
| + | :::* source 5 says he was a noted poet but doesn't specify he wrote in Urdu | ||
| + | :::* there is a date discrepancy to fix - source 5 says he was killed on April 8, 1990 but the article says (unsourced) that is was March 23 | ||
| + | :::* also source 5 spells his home village as Keegam Shopian while the article has Kegem Shopian. We don't have an article for the place either way so why not match the source? | ||
| + | :::* the article says he was shot and killed instantly but the source given for it (source 5) does not mention either fact | ||
| + | :::* sources 9 and 10 do not confirm the statements in the article (his third-place finishes in elections and number of votes) because they only give data for the first and second place candidates | ||
| + | :::* should there be redirects for the alternate spellings seen in some sources, such as Abdul Sattar Ranjur? | ||
| + | ::::[[Special:Contributions/184.147.147.28|184.147.147.28]] ([[User talk:184.147.147.28|talk]]) 22:04, 2 May 2014 (UTC) | ||
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Abdul Sattar Ranjoor
- ... that the Kashmiri communist leader and poet Abdul Sattar Ranjoor was killed in his house in 1990?
Created by Soman (talk). Self nominated at 19:19, 1 May 2014 (UTC).
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- ... that Kashmiri politician Abdul Sattar Ranjoor was also a famous poet and was assassinated by militants at age 73?
- On the review criteria:
- - New - Yes, the article was created on May 1
- - Long enough – Yes, the prose portion is 1,576 characters
- - is neutral - Yes, although it would be better to specify a specific group rather than "militants"
- - cites sources with inline citations - Yes
- - is free of close paraphrasing issues, copyright violations and plagiarism - yes for the sources I could access
- - Hook - is 112 characters (suggested alternate is 128 characters)
- - Hook facts - they all are cited
- - QPQ – ??? (sorry, I have not figured out how to tell this yet)
- Fact checking the article:
- NB sources 1, 3, 4, 6 and 11 are not available online so I have not been able to check against them and source 8 is viewable but would not show for me (source 8 is important because it alleges fraud on the part of his opponent's party)
- source 2 says party's founding secretary, not state secretary
- source 5 says he was a noted poet but doesn't specify he wrote in Urdu
- there is a date discrepancy to fix - source 5 says he was killed on April 8, 1990 but the article says (unsourced) that is was March 23
- also source 5 spells his home village as Keegam Shopian while the article has Kegem Shopian. We don't have an article for the place either way so why not match the source?
- the article says he was shot and killed instantly but the source given for it (source 5) does not mention either fact
- sources 9 and 10 do not confirm the statements in the article (his third-place finishes in elections and number of votes) because they only give data for the first and second place candidates
- should there be redirects for the alternate spellings seen in some sources, such as Abdul Sattar Ranjur?
- 184.147.147.28 (talk) 22:04, 2 May 2014 (UTC)
- ... that Kashmiri politician Abdul Sattar Ranjoor was also a famous poet and was assassinated by militants at age 73?