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**'''ALT2''' ... that the '''[[Gedenkstätte Berliner Mauer|Berlin Wall Memorial]]''' includes the only surviving genuine section of the [[Berlin Wall]], at the corner of '''[[Ackerstraße]]''' and [[Bernauer Straße]]? | **'''ALT2''' ... that the '''[[Gedenkstätte Berliner Mauer|Berlin Wall Memorial]]''' includes the only surviving genuine section of the [[Berlin Wall]], at the corner of '''[[Ackerstraße]]''' and [[Bernauer Straße]]? | ||
:(The reference for its being the only surviving genuine piece is one I put into [[Ackerstraße]]; it can easily be placed in the memorial article where it is more needed by someone who finds those citation templates easier than I do.) [[User:Yngvadottir|Yngvadottir]] ([[User talk:Yngvadottir|talk]]) 22:12, 23 July 2012 (UTC) | :(The reference for its being the only surviving genuine piece is one I put into [[Ackerstraße]]; it can easily be placed in the memorial article where it is more needed by someone who finds those citation templates easier than I do.) [[User:Yngvadottir|Yngvadottir]] ([[User talk:Yngvadottir|talk]]) 22:12, 23 July 2012 (UTC) | ||
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Ackerstraße, Gedenkstätte Berliner Mauer
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- ... that although the Berlin street of Ackerstraße (pictured) was split when the Berlin Wall was built, it now contains part of the Berlin Wall Memorial?
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Mutya Keisha Siobhan
- Comment: Both created today, both moved from userspace today.
Created/expanded by Thine Antique Pen (talk). Self nom at 20:45, 21 July 2012 (UTC)
Have they been proof read by a fluent German speaker?♦ Dr. Blofeld 21:39, 21 July 2012 (UTC)
Assuming the German has been checked per above comment, both articles are new enough and long enough. QPQ done. (Two preferred over one for double hooks.) Both articles are neutral enough. Both articles are fully supported by inline citations. Hook is properly formatted. All images have front page acceptable. It took a few read throughs to be sure the hook is in the article but I think it is there.
Offline and German sources were translated properly, were not plagiarised to write and fully support relevant text. --LauraHale (talk) 10:24, 23 July 2012 (UTC)
I think we're good to go. --LauraHale (talk) 10:24, 23 July 2012 (UTC)
Reopened: splitting of street is not mentioned in Ackerstraße, and translation needs further work. --Yngvadottir (talk) 12:43, 23 July 2012 (UTC)
I've extensively corrected and re-worked Ackerstraße (and corrected the picture caption above), and done some further tweaking on Gedenkstätte Berliner Mauer on top of what Gerda did. I've been bold and added a credit for myself for Ackerstraße. Neither of these was really ready for their debut, and the hook is slightly inaccurate and not logically clear. I propose:
- ALT1 ... that the Berlin Wall Memorial in Bernauer Straße includes a reconciliation chapel on the site of a church in Ackerstraße that was destroyed because it stood in the border strip? . . . or:
- ALT2 ... that the Berlin Wall Memorial includes the only surviving genuine section of the Berlin Wall, at the corner of Ackerstraße and Bernauer Straße?
- (The reference for its being the only surviving genuine piece is one I put into Ackerstraße; it can easily be placed in the memorial article where it is more needed by someone who finds those citation templates easier than I do.) Yngvadottir (talk) 22:12, 23 July 2012 (UTC)
