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− | :* | + | :* [[File:Symbol possible vote.svg|16px]] Article has been 5x expanded on 12 October (3,920 to 21,132) therefore is new and long enough. NPOV, effective use of citations. No obvious copyvio, paraphrasing. QPQ provided which is sufficient as assesses appropriate criteria. In terms of issues, the whole cast list is unsourced. There are grammatical errors. The sentence that starts with "The film is noted for its..." makes no sense. "rose-engraved engraved ring identical to one he was wearing after he departs" also. "by Akio voice actor" (probably Akio's). " The film has also screened" (change to was). In terms of the hooks, they due meet the requirements of DYK however could I suggest that a hook be written based around the climax of the film being the main character turning into a pink sports car? This would be more interesting of a hook. [[User:Cowlibob|Cowlibob]] ([[User talk:Cowlibob|talk]]) 19:34, 15 October 2019 (UTC) |
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Adolescence of Utena
- ... that director Kunihiko Ikuhara sought to make the 1999 film Adolescence of Utena "more naughty" than the television series it was adapted from? Source: Actual Sexuality issue 115, cited in article
- ALT1:... that the 1999 film Adolescence of Utena has been called "the ultimate arthouse anime"? Source: Silver Emulsion
- ALT2:... that the 1999 anime film Adolescence of Utena has screened at the the National Film Theatre in London and the Museum of Modern Art in New York City? Source: Anime Classics Zettai by Brian Camp and Julie Davis, cited in article
- Reviewed: Brants's whistling rat
5x expanded by Morgan695 (talk). Self-nominated at 04:01, 12 October 2019 (UTC).
Article has been 5x expanded on 12 October (3,920 to 21,132) therefore is new and long enough. NPOV, effective use of citations. No obvious copyvio, paraphrasing. QPQ provided which is sufficient as assesses appropriate criteria. In terms of issues, the whole cast list is unsourced. There are grammatical errors. The sentence that starts with "The film is noted for its..." makes no sense. "rose-engraved engraved ring identical to one he was wearing after he departs" also. "by Akio voice actor" (probably Akio's). " The film has also screened" (change to was). In terms of the hooks, they due meet the requirements of DYK however could I suggest that a hook be written based around the climax of the film being the main character turning into a pink sports car? This would be more interesting of a hook. Cowlibob (talk) 19:34, 15 October 2019 (UTC)