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** '''ALT1''':... that the 1999 film '''''[[Adolescence of Utena]]''''' has been called "the ultimate [[arthouse]] anime"? <small>Source: [https://www.silveremulsion.com/2013/05/01/stephen-reviews-revolutionary-girl-utena-the-movie-1999/ Silver Emulsion]</small>
 
** '''ALT1''':... that the 1999 film '''''[[Adolescence of Utena]]''''' has been called "the ultimate [[arthouse]] anime"? <small>Source: [https://www.silveremulsion.com/2013/05/01/stephen-reviews-revolutionary-girl-utena-the-movie-1999/ Silver Emulsion]</small>
 
** '''ALT2''':... that the 1999 anime film '''''[[Adolescence of Utena]]''''' has screened at the the [[BFI Southbank|National Film Theatre]] in London and the [[Museum of Modern Art]] in New York City? <small>Source: ''Anime Classics Zettai'' by Brian Camp and Julie Davis, cited in article</small>
 
** '''ALT2''':... that the 1999 anime film '''''[[Adolescence of Utena]]''''' has screened at the the [[BFI Southbank|National Film Theatre]] in London and the [[Museum of Modern Art]] in New York City? <small>Source: ''Anime Classics Zettai'' by Brian Camp and Julie Davis, cited in article</small>
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** '''ALT3''':... that the climactic scene of the 1999 film '''''[[Adolescence of Utena]]''''' involves the titular character being transformed into a pink sports car? <small>Source: source material, [https://www.animenewsnetwork.com/feature/2001-04-22 Anime News Network]</small>
 
:* ''Reviewed'': [[Template:Did you know nominations/Brants's whistling rat|Brants's whistling rat]]
 
:* ''Reviewed'': [[Template:Did you know nominations/Brants's whistling rat|Brants's whistling rat]]
 
<small>5x expanded by [[User:Morgan695|Morgan695]] ([[User talk:Morgan695|talk]]). Self-nominated at 04:01, 12 October 2019 (UTC).</small>
 
<small>5x expanded by [[User:Morgan695|Morgan695]] ([[User talk:Morgan695|talk]]). Self-nominated at 04:01, 12 October 2019 (UTC).</small>
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:* [[File:Symbol possible vote.svg|16px]] Article has been 5x expanded on 12 October (3,920 to 21,132) therefore is new and long enough. NPOV, effective use of citations. No obvious copyvio, paraphrasing. QPQ provided which is sufficient as assesses appropriate criteria. In terms of issues, the whole cast list is unsourced. There are grammatical errors. The sentence that starts with "The film is noted for its..." makes no sense. "rose-engraved engraved ring identical to one he was wearing after he departs" also. "by Akio voice actor" (probably Akio's). " The film has also screened" (change to was). In terms of the hooks, they due meet the requirements of DYK however could I suggest that a hook be written based around the climax of the film being the main character turning into a pink sports car? This would be more interesting of a hook. [[User:Cowlibob|Cowlibob]] ([[User talk:Cowlibob|talk]]) 19:34, 15 October 2019 (UTC)
 
:* [[File:Symbol possible vote.svg|16px]] Article has been 5x expanded on 12 October (3,920 to 21,132) therefore is new and long enough. NPOV, effective use of citations. No obvious copyvio, paraphrasing. QPQ provided which is sufficient as assesses appropriate criteria. In terms of issues, the whole cast list is unsourced. There are grammatical errors. The sentence that starts with "The film is noted for its..." makes no sense. "rose-engraved engraved ring identical to one he was wearing after he departs" also. "by Akio voice actor" (probably Akio's). " The film has also screened" (change to was). In terms of the hooks, they due meet the requirements of DYK however could I suggest that a hook be written based around the climax of the film being the main character turning into a pink sports car? This would be more interesting of a hook. [[User:Cowlibob|Cowlibob]] ([[User talk:Cowlibob|talk]]) 19:34, 15 October 2019 (UTC)
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::* {{reply to|Cowlibob}} Requested edits have been made. I have added an ALT3, with the caveat that it may not satisfy [[WP:DYKHOOK]] (''"If the subject is a work of fiction or a fictional character, the hook must involve the real world in some way."''). [[User:Morgan695|Morgan695]] ([[User talk:Morgan695|talk]]) 20:42, 15 October 2019 (UTC)
  
 
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Adolescence of Utena

5x expanded by Morgan695 (talk). Self-nominated at 04:01, 12 October 2019 (UTC).

  • Symbol possible vote.svg Article has been 5x expanded on 12 October (3,920 to 21,132) therefore is new and long enough. NPOV, effective use of citations. No obvious copyvio, paraphrasing. QPQ provided which is sufficient as assesses appropriate criteria. In terms of issues, the whole cast list is unsourced. There are grammatical errors. The sentence that starts with "The film is noted for its..." makes no sense. "rose-engraved engraved ring identical to one he was wearing after he departs" also. "by Akio voice actor" (probably Akio's). " The film has also screened" (change to was). In terms of the hooks, they due meet the requirements of DYK however could I suggest that a hook be written based around the climax of the film being the main character turning into a pink sports car? This would be more interesting of a hook. Cowlibob (talk) 19:34, 15 October 2019 (UTC)
  • Template:Reply to Requested edits have been made. I have added an ALT3, with the caveat that it may not satisfy WP:DYKHOOK ("If the subject is a work of fiction or a fictional character, the hook must involve the real world in some way."). Morgan695 (talk) 20:42, 15 October 2019 (UTC)