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The result was: '''promoted''' by ''[[User: Allen3|Allen3]]''&nbsp;<sup>[[User talk:Allen3|talk]]</sup> 12:32, 12 January 2015 (UTC)<br />
 
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====Adrift (video game)====
 
====Adrift (video game)====
 
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* ... that the original prototype for the upcoming video game '''''[[Adrift (video game)|Adrift]]''''' was developed by three people in ten weeks?
 
* ... that the original prototype for the upcoming video game '''''[[Adrift (video game)|Adrift]]''''' was developed by three people in ten weeks?
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:* '''ALT1''':... that the upcoming video game '''''[[Adrift (video game)|Adrift]]''''' is a metaphor for the controversy caused by developer Adam Orth's comments on the [[Xbox One]]'s proposed [[digital rights management]] strategy?
 
:* '''ALT1''':... that the upcoming video game '''''[[Adrift (video game)|Adrift]]''''' is a metaphor for the controversy caused by developer Adam Orth's comments on the [[Xbox One]]'s proposed [[digital rights management]] strategy?
 
:* ''Reviewed'': [[Template:Did you know nominations/Hard Candy (film)|Hard Candy (film)]]
 
:* ''Reviewed'': [[Template:Did you know nominations/Hard Candy (film)|Hard Candy (film)]]
 
:* ''Comment'': [http://threeonezero.com/developement-progress-puzzle-design-and-iteration/ Hook source], [http://www.polygon.com/2014/2/20/5427350/adam-orth-game-adrift ALT1 source]
 
:* ''Comment'': [http://threeonezero.com/developement-progress-puzzle-design-and-iteration/ Hook source], [http://www.polygon.com/2014/2/20/5427350/adam-orth-game-adrift ALT1 source]
 
<small>Created by [[User:Rhain1999|Rhain1999]] ([[User talk:Rhain1999|talk]]). Self nominated at 08:05, 15 December 2014 (UTC)</small>.
 
<small>Created by [[User:Rhain1999|Rhain1999]] ([[User talk:Rhain1999|talk]]). Self nominated at 08:05, 15 December 2014 (UTC)</small>.
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:*  [[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] The hook - while compelling - seems to be sourced to a self-published source, namely, the video game publisher's own website. Could the hook be changed to "that developers claimed the original ..."? Other than that it's new enough, long enough, well-sourced, and seems to meet all other criteria. [[User:DocumentError|DocumentError]] ([[User talk:DocumentError|talk]]) 01:41, 17 December 2014 (UTC)
 
:*  [[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] The hook - while compelling - seems to be sourced to a self-published source, namely, the video game publisher's own website. Could the hook be changed to "that developers claimed the original ..."? Other than that it's new enough, long enough, well-sourced, and seems to meet all other criteria. [[User:DocumentError|DocumentError]] ([[User talk:DocumentError|talk]]) 01:41, 17 December 2014 (UTC)
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:* [[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] New (Dec 15th), long enough, neutral, a few close paraphrasing concerns [https://tools.wmflabs.org/dupdet/compare.php?url1=https%3A%2F%2Fen.wikipedia.org%2Fw%2Findex.php%3Ftitle%3DAdrift_%28video_game%29%26oldid%3D640337491&url2=http%3A%2F%2Fkotaku.com%2Fadam-orth-is-turning-his-personal-disaster-into-a-beaut-1520037629&minwords=2&minchars=13&removequotations=1 here], [[Wikipedia:QPQ|QPQ]] done. First hook needs an immediate ref in article (see [[Wikipedia:Did you know#Eligibility criteria|3b]]). Rephrased second hook to be a bit more neutral. Really, really nice work with this. Please ping me if I don't respond. <span style='font:bold small-caps 1.2em "Avenir";color:#909'>czar</span>&nbsp;[[user:czar|<span style="color:black;font-size:1.2em"><u>⨹</u></span>]] 23:45, 10 January 2015 (UTC)
 
:* [[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] New (Dec 15th), long enough, neutral, a few close paraphrasing concerns [https://tools.wmflabs.org/dupdet/compare.php?url1=https%3A%2F%2Fen.wikipedia.org%2Fw%2Findex.php%3Ftitle%3DAdrift_%28video_game%29%26oldid%3D640337491&url2=http%3A%2F%2Fkotaku.com%2Fadam-orth-is-turning-his-personal-disaster-into-a-beaut-1520037629&minwords=2&minchars=13&removequotations=1 here], [[Wikipedia:QPQ|QPQ]] done. First hook needs an immediate ref in article (see [[Wikipedia:Did you know#Eligibility criteria|3b]]). Rephrased second hook to be a bit more neutral. Really, really nice work with this. Please ping me if I don't respond. <span style='font:bold small-caps 1.2em "Avenir";color:#909'>czar</span>&nbsp;[[user:czar|<span style="color:black;font-size:1.2em"><u>⨹</u></span>]] 23:45, 10 January 2015 (UTC)
 
:::Thanks for the feedback, {{u|czar}}! I've gone ahead and changed some of the things you mentioned. Let me know if there are any remaining problems. -- [[User:Rhain1999|<span style="color: #008;">'''''Rhain'''''1999</span>]] <sup>([[User talk:Rhain1999|talk to me]])</sup> 02:13, 11 January 2015 (UTC)
 
:::Thanks for the feedback, {{u|czar}}! I've gone ahead and changed some of the things you mentioned. Let me know if there are any remaining problems. -- [[User:Rhain1999|<span style="color: #008;">'''''Rhain'''''1999</span>]] <sup>([[User talk:Rhain1999|talk to me]])</sup> 02:13, 11 January 2015 (UTC)
:::: [[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] works for me, hooks check out, gtg. One thing I'd add is that the close paraphrasing [https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Adrift_(video_game)&diff=641954741&oldid=641937730 changes] should be more than moving around the affected words but recasting the sentence to similar words wherever they can be avoided <span style='font:bold small-caps 1.2em "Avenir";color:#909'>czar</span>&nbsp;[[user:czar|<span style="color:black;font-size:1.2em"><u>⨹</u></span>]] 02:27, 11 January 2015 (UTC)
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:::: [[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] works for me, hooks check out, gtg. One thing I'd add is that the close paraphrasing [https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Adrift_(video_game)&diff=641954741&oldid=641937730 changes] should be more than moving around the affected words but recasting the sentence to similar words wherever they can be avoided <span style='font:bold small-caps 1.2em "Avenir";color:#909'>czar</span>&nbsp;[[user:czar|<span style="color:black;font-size:1.2em"><u>⨹</u></span>]] 02:27, 11 January 2015 (UTC)</div></noinclude><!--Please do not write below this line or remove this line. Place comments above this line.-->
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Latest revision as of 12:32, 12 January 2015

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Allen3 talk 12:32, 12 January 2015 (UTC)

Adrift (video game)

  • ... that the original prototype for the upcoming video game Adrift was developed by three people in ten weeks?

Created by Rhain1999 (talk). Self nominated at 08:05, 15 December 2014 (UTC).

  • Symbol question.svg The hook - while compelling - seems to be sourced to a self-published source, namely, the video game publisher's own website. Could the hook be changed to "that developers claimed the original ..."? Other than that it's new enough, long enough, well-sourced, and seems to meet all other criteria. DocumentError (talk) 01:41, 17 December 2014 (UTC)
  • Template:Ping I have actually read some external sources that back up the statement in the hook, but I'm fine with changing the hook as you suggested. -- Rhain1999 (talk to me) 04:03, 17 December 2014 (UTC)
  • Also, would it be possible to change the hook so that the title of the game reads "ADR1FT"? This is the official title for the game, and I actually believe that the article itself should be renamed if it does not conflict with any policies. -- Rhain1999 (talk to me) 01:49, 18 December 2014 (UTC)
Template:Ping, courtesy ping. Re: ADR1FT, the precedent of Se7en and Driv3r is to not spell it that way (with the sole exception of mentioning it once as a stylization in the lede). czar  04:38, 2 January 2015 (UTC)
I thought this was the case. Thanks for the information, Template:U! -- Rhain1999 (talk to me) 08:34, 2 January 2015 (UTC)
  • Symbol redirect vote 4.svg Original reviewer has not responded to this. New review requested. Fuebaey (talk) 22:07, 10 January 2015 (UTC)
  • Symbol question.svg New (Dec 15th), long enough, neutral, a few close paraphrasing concerns here, QPQ done. First hook needs an immediate ref in article (see 3b). Rephrased second hook to be a bit more neutral. Really, really nice work with this. Please ping me if I don't respond. czar  23:45, 10 January 2015 (UTC)
Thanks for the feedback, Template:U! I've gone ahead and changed some of the things you mentioned. Let me know if there are any remaining problems. -- Rhain1999 (talk to me) 02:13, 11 January 2015 (UTC)
Symbol confirmed.svg works for me, hooks check out, gtg. One thing I'd add is that the close paraphrasing changes should be more than moving around the affected words but recasting the sentence to similar words wherever they can be avoided czar  02:27, 11 January 2015 (UTC)