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::::: Went over board. Sentence deleted.--'''[[User talk:Nvvchar|<span style="font-variant:small-caps;color:#003366">Nvvchar</span>]]'''. 15:29, 12 July 2013 (UTC) | ::::: Went over board. Sentence deleted.--'''[[User talk:Nvvchar|<span style="font-variant:small-caps;color:#003366">Nvvchar</span>]]'''. 15:29, 12 July 2013 (UTC) | ||
:::::: Pity, I kind of liked the image conjured, but this is an encyclopedia. I will complete the review of this tomorrow if someone else doesn't get there first. [[User:Gatoclass|Gatoclass]] ([[User talk:Gatoclass|talk]]) 16:17, 12 July 2013 (UTC) | :::::: Pity, I kind of liked the image conjured, but this is an encyclopedia. I will complete the review of this tomorrow if someone else doesn't get there first. [[User:Gatoclass|Gatoclass]] ([[User talk:Gatoclass|talk]]) 16:17, 12 July 2013 (UTC) | ||
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Adèle Dumilâtre
- ... that The Times of London described French ballet dancer Adèle Dumilâtre (pictured) as "so ethereal ... that she almost looked transparent"?
Created by Dr. Blofeld (talk), Rosiestep (talk), Nvvchar (talk). Nominated by Dr. Blofeld (talk) at 10:08, 3 July 2013 (UTC).
Reviewed Template:Did you know nominations/Blackwater fire of 1937
- Sorry, it is not a quote from the book but a general observation. I have removed the quote but the text could also be deleted if it is not acceptable.--Nvvchar. 05:52, 5 July 2013 (UTC)
- I am still struggling to source the following sentence: She wore a voluminous and bright glitzy skirt and together with the lighting effect presented an effortless dancing style of celestial beauty. The provided source says nothing about Adele's costume or the lighting, and "effortless dancing style of celestial beauty" appears to be pure WP:OR. There is actually only one statement about Dumilatre in the source and that is the one already quoted in the hook, that "she looked so ethereal as to be almost transparent". So somebody needs to either rework the above sentence about costumes, lighting and "celestial beauty" to conform with the source, or provide a different source, or just delete the unsourced statements. Gatoclass (talk) 15:21, 12 July 2013 (UTC)
