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::*Hi, I'll start reviewing this one. [[User:SlimVirgin|SlimVirgin]] <small><sup>[[User_talk:SlimVirgin|(talk)]]</sup></small> 02:01, 3 January 2014 (UTC) | ::*Hi, I'll start reviewing this one. [[User:SlimVirgin|SlimVirgin]] <small><sup>[[User_talk:SlimVirgin|(talk)]]</sup></small> 02:01, 3 January 2014 (UTC) | ||
| − | {{od}} [[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] Article length good, hook length good, hook is interesting, sources for the hook are good, creation date good, no sign of copyvio. | + | {{od}} [[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] Article length good, hook length good, hook is interesting, sources for the hook are good, creation date good, no sign of copyvio or close paraphrasing. |
Images: The main image is fine. I'm not so sure about [[:File:Robert Houdin Ethereal Suspension.jpg]], which needs information about first publication, authorship or something, to show that it's free. | Images: The main image is fine. I'm not so sure about [[:File:Robert Houdin Ethereal Suspension.jpg]], which needs information about first publication, authorship or something, to show that it's free. | ||
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::*Okay, sounds good. [[User:SlimVirgin|SlimVirgin]] <small><sup>[[User_talk:SlimVirgin|(talk)]]</sup></small> 20:59, 3 January 2014 (UTC) | ::*Okay, sounds good. [[User:SlimVirgin|SlimVirgin]] <small><sup>[[User_talk:SlimVirgin|(talk)]]</sup></small> 20:59, 3 January 2014 (UTC) | ||
:::* I believe I have now corrected all of the above. I've done each correction in a separate summarised edit, in the same order as above, to make it easy for you to check. Any more problems, please let me know.[[User:Storye book|Storye book]] ([[User talk:Storye book|talk]]) 13:15, 4 January 2014 (UTC) | :::* I believe I have now corrected all of the above. I've done each correction in a separate summarised edit, in the same order as above, to make it easy for you to check. Any more problems, please let me know.[[User:Storye book|Storye book]] ([[User talk:Storye book|talk]]) 13:15, 4 January 2014 (UTC) | ||
| + | ::::*[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] That all looks fine. Just a minor thing: it would be helpful to add a page number (p. 25) to the file page for [[:File:Ethereal Suspension Robert-Houdin 1849.jpg]] in that publication. Anyway, thanks for the fixes and this looks good to go. [[User:SlimVirgin|SlimVirgin]] <small><sup>[[User_talk:SlimVirgin|(talk)]]</sup></small> 21:16, 4 January 2014 (UTC) | ||
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Aerial suspension (illusion)
- ... that the aerial suspension illusion (pictured) was first recorded in the early 19th century in India?
- Reviewed: Bob Givens
Created by Storye book (talk). Self nominated at 19:38, 2 January 2014 (UTC).
- Update: reference 9 which was tagged with "page needed" template has now been replaced with a different online reference. Storye book (talk) 21:25, 2 January 2014 (UTC)
- Hi, I'll start reviewing this one. SlimVirgin (talk) 02:01, 3 January 2014 (UTC)
Template:Od
Article length good, hook length good, hook is interesting, sources for the hook are good, creation date good, no sign of copyvio or close paraphrasing.
Images: The main image is fine. I'm not so sure about File:Robert Houdin Ethereal Suspension.jpg, which needs information about first publication, authorship or something, to show that it's free.
Some sourcing issues that I think need to be fixed:
- This ref seems to be from the EB 1911 so that should be cited.
- Magicpedia is a wiki that anyone can edit so that shouldn't be used as a source.
- AllAboutMagicians.com says that it takes its information from Magicpedia, Wikipedia and the Encyclopedia of Magic and Magicians. The third one sounds okay, so that should be used as a source instead.
- Not clear what www.pcsorcarmagician.com is.
SlimVirgin (talk) 02:49, 3 January 2014 (UTC)
- Thank you for the heads up on these. I'm hoping to get this sorted out in the next day or so. Storye book (talk) 09:47, 3 January 2014 (UTC)
- Okay, sounds good. SlimVirgin (talk) 20:59, 3 January 2014 (UTC)
- I believe I have now corrected all of the above. I've done each correction in a separate summarised edit, in the same order as above, to make it easy for you to check. Any more problems, please let me know.Storye book (talk) 13:15, 4 January 2014 (UTC)
That all looks fine. Just a minor thing: it would be helpful to add a page number (p. 25) to the file page for File:Ethereal Suspension Robert-Houdin 1849.jpg in that publication. Anyway, thanks for the fixes and this looks good to go. SlimVirgin (talk) 21:16, 4 January 2014 (UTC)
