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[[File:Brahmin aerial suspension ca 1830.jpg|100x100px|Early 19th century performance of aerial suspension illusion in India]] | [[File:Brahmin aerial suspension ca 1830.jpg|100x100px|Early 19th century performance of aerial suspension illusion in India]] | ||
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* ... that the '''[[Aerial suspension (illusion)|aerial suspension]]''' illusion ''(pictured)'' was first recorded in the early 19th century in [[India]]? | * ... that the '''[[Aerial suspension (illusion)|aerial suspension]]''' illusion ''(pictured)'' was first recorded in the early 19th century in [[India]]? | ||
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:* ''Reviewed'': [[Template:Did you know nominations/Bob Givens|Bob Givens]] | :* ''Reviewed'': [[Template:Did you know nominations/Bob Givens|Bob Givens]] | ||
<small>Created by [[User:Storye book|Storye book]] ([[User talk:Storye book|talk]]). Self nominated at 19:38, 2 January 2014 (UTC)</small>. | <small>Created by [[User:Storye book|Storye book]] ([[User talk:Storye book|talk]]). Self nominated at 19:38, 2 January 2014 (UTC)</small>. | ||
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:* ''Update'': reference 9 which was tagged with "page needed" template has now been replaced with a different online reference. [[User:Storye book|Storye book]] ([[User talk:Storye book|talk]]) 21:25, 2 January 2014 (UTC) | :* ''Update'': reference 9 which was tagged with "page needed" template has now been replaced with a different online reference. [[User:Storye book|Storye book]] ([[User talk:Storye book|talk]]) 21:25, 2 January 2014 (UTC) | ||
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::::*[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] That all looks fine. Just a minor thing: it would be helpful to add a page number (p. 25) to the file page for [[:File:Ethereal Suspension Robert-Houdin 1849.jpg]] in that publication. Anyway, thanks for the fixes and this looks good to go. [[User:SlimVirgin|SlimVirgin]] <small><sup>[[User_talk:SlimVirgin|(talk)]]</sup></small> 21:16, 4 January 2014 (UTC) | ::::*[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] That all looks fine. Just a minor thing: it would be helpful to add a page number (p. 25) to the file page for [[:File:Ethereal Suspension Robert-Houdin 1849.jpg]] in that publication. Anyway, thanks for the fixes and this looks good to go. [[User:SlimVirgin|SlimVirgin]] <small><sup>[[User_talk:SlimVirgin|(talk)]]</sup></small> 21:16, 4 January 2014 (UTC) | ||
:::::* Done. Thank you. [[User:Storye book|Storye book]] ([[User talk:Storye book|talk]]) 21:22, 4 January 2014 (UTC) | :::::* Done. Thank you. [[User:Storye book|Storye book]] ([[User talk:Storye book|talk]]) 21:22, 4 January 2014 (UTC) | ||
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Latest revision as of 13:13, 15 January 2014
- The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Hassocks5489 (Floreat Hova!) 13:13, 15 January 2014 (UTC)
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Aerial suspension (illusion)
- ... that the aerial suspension illusion (pictured) was first recorded in the early 19th century in India?
- Reviewed: Bob Givens
Created by Storye book (talk). Self nominated at 19:38, 2 January 2014 (UTC).
- Update: reference 9 which was tagged with "page needed" template has now been replaced with a different online reference. Storye book (talk) 21:25, 2 January 2014 (UTC)
- Hi, I'll start reviewing this one. SlimVirgin (talk) 02:01, 3 January 2014 (UTC)
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Article length good, hook length good, hook is interesting, sources for the hook are good, creation date good, no sign of copyvio or close paraphrasing.
Images: The main image is fine. I'm not so sure about File:Robert Houdin Ethereal Suspension.jpg, which needs information about first publication, authorship or something, to show that it's free.
Some sourcing issues that I think need to be fixed:
- This ref seems to be from the EB 1911 so that should be cited.
- Magicpedia is a wiki that anyone can edit so that shouldn't be used as a source.
- AllAboutMagicians.com says that it takes its information from Magicpedia, Wikipedia and the Encyclopedia of Magic and Magicians. The third one sounds okay, so that should be used as a source instead.
- Not clear what www.pcsorcarmagician.com is.
SlimVirgin (talk) 02:49, 3 January 2014 (UTC)
- Thank you for the heads up on these. I'm hoping to get this sorted out in the next day or so. Storye book (talk) 09:47, 3 January 2014 (UTC)
- Okay, sounds good. SlimVirgin (talk) 20:59, 3 January 2014 (UTC)
- I believe I have now corrected all of the above. I've done each correction in a separate summarised edit, in the same order as above, to make it easy for you to check. Any more problems, please let me know.Storye book (talk) 13:15, 4 January 2014 (UTC)
That all looks fine. Just a minor thing: it would be helpful to add a page number (p. 25) to the file page for File:Ethereal Suspension Robert-Houdin 1849.jpg in that publication. Anyway, thanks for the fixes and this looks good to go. SlimVirgin (talk) 21:16, 4 January 2014 (UTC)
- Done. Thank you. Storye book (talk) 21:22, 4 January 2014 (UTC)
