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*[[File:Symbol redirect vote 4.svg|16px]]  Full review needed. [[User:BlueMoonset|BlueMoonset]] ([[User talk:BlueMoonset|talk]]) 03:43, 11 July 2015 (UTC)
 
*[[File:Symbol redirect vote 4.svg|16px]]  Full review needed. [[User:BlueMoonset|BlueMoonset]] ([[User talk:BlueMoonset|talk]]) 03:43, 11 July 2015 (UTC)
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*[[File:Symbol possible vote.svg|16px]] Dates are good, length is fine, citations are plentiful, the hook fact is fun, factual, and directly cited with a reliable source. (I have a strong preference for the brevity of ALT2.) Tone is neutral and grammar is solid but there are instances of close paraphrasing that must be corrected before this can pass. - [[User:Dravecky|Dravecky]] ([[User talk:Dravecky|talk]]) 05:51, 28 July 2015 (UTC)
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:::''Source'': "His mother, a teacher, homeschooled him with lessons that were rigorous but unorthodox."[http://www.latimes.com/entertainment/arts/theater/la-et-cm-ca-curious-incident-20141005-story.html]
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:::''Article'': "His mother, a teacher, homeschooled him with lessons that were rigorous but unorthodox."
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:::''Source'': "Making the transition to a more traditional school environment was challenging and sometimes bewildering."[http://www.latimes.com/entertainment/arts/theater/la-et-cm-ca-curious-incident-20141005-story.html]
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:::''Article'': "[...] making the transition to a more traditional school environment was challenging and sometimes bewildering."
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:::''Source'': "Sharp was born in London, and spent the first seven years of his life traveling with his family around the US. [...] Later the family traveled throughout Europe in a caravan. "[http://www.thedailybeast.com/articles/2014/12/07/the-brit-who-stormed-broadway.html]
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:::''Article'': "Sharp's family traveled around the U.S. for the first seven years of his life. Later, the family traveled throughout Europe in a caravan."
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:::''Source'': "Sharp always wanted to be an actor: his first role, aged 7, was as Piglet in Winnie-The-Pooh."[http://www.thedailybeast.com/articles/2014/12/07/the-brit-who-stormed-broadway.html]
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:::''Article'': "Sharp always wanted to be an actor. At age 7, he made his acting debut as Piglet in Winnie-the-Pooh."
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:::There are more examples but this sampling illustrates the nature of the issue. - [[User:Dravecky|Dravecky]] ([[User talk:Dravecky|talk]]) 05:51, 28 July 2015 (UTC)
  
 
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Revision as of 05:53, 28 July 2015

Alex Sharp

5x expanded by TonyTheTiger (talk) and NOVAASA (talk). Nominated by TonyTheTiger (talk) at 23:50, 9 June 2015 (UTC).

Template:Reply to Metro would not count as a RS. It is a tabloid newspaper of poor repute in the same family as the Daily Mail. However here is an alternative which specifies that he was the youngest winner in that category. [[1]] Cowlibob (talk) 21:54, 24 June 2015 (UTC)
Thx.--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 03:36, 25 June 2015 (UTC)
  • Tony, there are too many "Tonys" in the hook :) Can you leave off the 69th Tony Awards? Yoninah (talk) 00:34, 2 July 2015 (UTC)
  • Symbol redirect vote 4.svg Full review needed. BlueMoonset (talk) 03:43, 11 July 2015 (UTC)
  • Symbol possible vote.svg Dates are good, length is fine, citations are plentiful, the hook fact is fun, factual, and directly cited with a reliable source. (I have a strong preference for the brevity of ALT2.) Tone is neutral and grammar is solid but there are instances of close paraphrasing that must be corrected before this can pass. - Dravecky (talk) 05:51, 28 July 2015 (UTC)
Source: "His mother, a teacher, homeschooled him with lessons that were rigorous but unorthodox."[2]
Article: "His mother, a teacher, homeschooled him with lessons that were rigorous but unorthodox."
Source: "Making the transition to a more traditional school environment was challenging and sometimes bewildering."[3]
Article: "[...] making the transition to a more traditional school environment was challenging and sometimes bewildering."
Source: "Sharp was born in London, and spent the first seven years of his life traveling with his family around the US. [...] Later the family traveled throughout Europe in a caravan. "[4]
Article: "Sharp's family traveled around the U.S. for the first seven years of his life. Later, the family traveled throughout Europe in a caravan."
Source: "Sharp always wanted to be an actor: his first role, aged 7, was as Piglet in Winnie-The-Pooh."[5]
Article: "Sharp always wanted to be an actor. At age 7, he made his acting debut as Piglet in Winnie-the-Pooh."
There are more examples but this sampling illustrates the nature of the issue. - Dravecky (talk) 05:51, 28 July 2015 (UTC)