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* ... that '''[[Alex Sharp]]''' became the youngest person to win the [[Tony Award for Best Actor in a Play]] at the [[69th Tony Awards]]?
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* ...<s> that '''[[Alex Sharp]]''' became the youngest person to win the [[Tony Award for Best Actor in a Play]] at the [[69th Tony Awards]]</s>?
  
 
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**It seems like your complaints are related to [https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Alex_Sharp&type=revision&diff=666042261&oldid=666015747 these edits] by {{u|NOVAASA}}.--[[User:TonyTheTiger|TonyTheTiger]] <small>([[User talk:TonyTheTiger|T]] / [[Special:Contributions/TonyTheTiger|C]] / [[WP:FOUR]] / [[WP:CHICAGO]] / [[WP:WAWARD]])</small> 00:54, 29 July 2015 (UTC)
 
**It seems like your complaints are related to [https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Alex_Sharp&type=revision&diff=666042261&oldid=666015747 these edits] by {{u|NOVAASA}}.--[[User:TonyTheTiger|TonyTheTiger]] <small>([[User talk:TonyTheTiger|T]] / [[Special:Contributions/TonyTheTiger|C]] / [[WP:FOUR]] / [[WP:CHICAGO]] / [[WP:WAWARD]])</small> 00:54, 29 July 2015 (UTC)
 
*I have tried to address your concerns.--[[User:TonyTheTiger|TonyTheTiger]] <small>([[User talk:TonyTheTiger|T]] / [[Special:Contributions/TonyTheTiger|C]] / [[WP:FOUR]] / [[WP:CHICAGO]] / [[WP:WAWARD]])</small> 03:08, 29 July 2015 (UTC)
 
*I have tried to address your concerns.--[[User:TonyTheTiger|TonyTheTiger]] <small>([[User talk:TonyTheTiger|T]] / [[Special:Contributions/TonyTheTiger|C]] / [[WP:FOUR]] / [[WP:CHICAGO]] / [[WP:WAWARD]])</small> 03:08, 29 July 2015 (UTC)
 
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**[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] Okay, that clears up the vast majority of my verbiage concerns. (There are a few word choices we could debate, but that's for some other occasion.) Still a strong preference for ALT2 and I've struck the main hook as it's potentially slightly misleading. - [[User:Dravecky|Dravecky]] ([[User talk:Dravecky|talk]]) 03:59, 29 July 2015 (UTC)
 
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Alex Sharp

5x expanded by TonyTheTiger (talk) and NOVAASA (talk). Nominated by TonyTheTiger (talk) at 23:50, 9 June 2015 (UTC).

Template:Reply to Metro would not count as a RS. It is a tabloid newspaper of poor repute in the same family as the Daily Mail. However here is an alternative which specifies that he was the youngest winner in that category. [[1]] Cowlibob (talk) 21:54, 24 June 2015 (UTC)
Thx.--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 03:36, 25 June 2015 (UTC)
  • Tony, there are too many "Tonys" in the hook :) Can you leave off the 69th Tony Awards? Yoninah (talk) 00:34, 2 July 2015 (UTC)
  • Symbol redirect vote 4.svg Full review needed. BlueMoonset (talk) 03:43, 11 July 2015 (UTC)
  • Symbol possible vote.svg Dates are good, length is fine, citations are plentiful, the hook fact is fun, factual, and directly cited with a reliable source. (I have a strong preference for the brevity of ALT2.) Tone is neutral and grammar is solid but there are instances of close paraphrasing that must be corrected before this can pass. - Dravecky (talk) 05:51, 28 July 2015 (UTC)
Source: "His mother, a teacher, homeschooled him with lessons that were rigorous but unorthodox."[2]
Article: "His mother, a teacher, homeschooled him with lessons that were rigorous but unorthodox."
Source: "Making the transition to a more traditional school environment was challenging and sometimes bewildering."[3]
Article: "[...] making the transition to a more traditional school environment was challenging and sometimes bewildering."
Source: "Sharp was born in London, and spent the first seven years of his life traveling with his family around the US. [...] Later the family traveled throughout Europe in a caravan. "[4]
Article: "Sharp's family traveled around the U.S. for the first seven years of his life. Later, the family traveled throughout Europe in a caravan."
Source: "Sharp always wanted to be an actor: his first role, aged 7, was as Piglet in Winnie-The-Pooh."[5]
Article: "Sharp always wanted to be an actor. At age 7, he made his acting debut as Piglet in Winnie-the-Pooh."
There are more examples but this sampling illustrates the nature of the issue. - Dravecky (talk) 05:51, 28 July 2015 (UTC)