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(alt hook; maybe "first ascended" is more precise than "first climbed".)
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::*Thank you for the review. I have added inline citations for the hook fact in the Bryn article, and added inline citations to the Rubenson article on his 1907 achievement. Also slightly expanded [[Stetind]] with some details from the first ascent. [[User:Oceanh|Oceanh]] ([[User talk:Oceanh|talk]]) 00:49, 14 November 2012 (UTC) An alternative hook (maybe ''first ascended'' is more precise than ''first climbed'', as several climbers had attempted but failed to reach the summit):
 
::*Thank you for the review. I have added inline citations for the hook fact in the Bryn article, and added inline citations to the Rubenson article on his 1907 achievement. Also slightly expanded [[Stetind]] with some details from the first ascent. [[User:Oceanh|Oceanh]] ([[User talk:Oceanh|talk]]) 00:49, 14 November 2012 (UTC) An alternative hook (maybe ''first ascended'' is more precise than ''first climbed'', as several climbers had attempted but failed to reach the summit):
 
:::*ALT1:... that [[Stetind]] ''(pictured)'' was first ascended in '''[[1910 in Norway|1910]]''' by '''[[Alf Bonnevie Bryn|Bryn]]''', '''[[Carl Wilhelm Rubenson|Rubenson]]''' and [[Ferdinand Schjelderup|Schjelderup]]?
 
:::*ALT1:... that [[Stetind]] ''(pictured)'' was first ascended in '''[[1910 in Norway|1910]]''' by '''[[Alf Bonnevie Bryn|Bryn]]''', '''[[Carl Wilhelm Rubenson|Rubenson]]''' and [[Ferdinand Schjelderup|Schjelderup]]?
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::::*[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] Good to go. I guess ALT1 is better than the original hook, but both can be used. [[User:Mentoz86|Mentoz86]] ([[User talk:Mentoz86|talk]]) 21:50, 14 November 2012 (UTC)
  
  
 
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Revision as of 21:50, 14 November 2012

1910 in Norway, Alf Bonnevie Bryn, Carl Wilhelm Rubenson

Stetind (1,392 m)

Created/expanded by Oceanh (talk). Self nom at 18:01, 31 October 2012 (UTC)

  • Symbol question.svg Articles are new enough (Rubenson and Bryn created on 27 October, 5x expansion on 1910 in Norway started on 31 October) and long enough (Rubenson is 1757, Bryn is 1831, 1910 is expanded from 34 to 1733 chars). All articles are neutral and have inline citations. Hookfact is mentioned in all three articles and supported by an inline citation in 2 of 3 articles: an inline citation for the hook-fact is required in Bryn's article. Another thing, but not required for DYK: Rubenson's article says that " the highest altitude anybody had reached until then", this is supported by a citation further down in the article, but isn't this fact something that should have an inline citation? Mentoz86 (talk) 11:37, 13 November 2012 (UTC)
  • Thank you for the review. I have added inline citations for the hook fact in the Bryn article, and added inline citations to the Rubenson article on his 1907 achievement. Also slightly expanded Stetind with some details from the first ascent. Oceanh (talk) 00:49, 14 November 2012 (UTC) An alternative hook (maybe first ascended is more precise than first climbed, as several climbers had attempted but failed to reach the summit):
  • Symbol confirmed.svg Good to go. I guess ALT1 is better than the original hook, but both can be used. Mentoz86 (talk) 21:50, 14 November 2012 (UTC)