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* <s>... that '''[[Angus Barbieri's fast|Angus Barbieri fasted]]''' for more than a year and lost {{convert|276|lb}}, setting a world record?[https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC2495396/pdf/postmedj00315-0056.pdf]</s> | * <s>... that '''[[Angus Barbieri's fast|Angus Barbieri fasted]]''' for more than a year and lost {{convert|276|lb}}, setting a world record?[https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC2495396/pdf/postmedj00315-0056.pdf]</s> | ||
:*''Reviewed'': [[Template:Did you know nominations/Ignaz Kirchner]] | :*''Reviewed'': [[Template:Did you know nominations/Ignaz Kirchner]] | ||
<small>Moved to mainspace by [[User:Larrybillinger|Larrybillinger]] ([[User talk:Larrybillinger|talk]]) and [[User:Catrìona|Catrìona]] ([[User talk:Catrìona|talk]]). Nominated by [[User:Catrìona|Catrìona]] ([[User talk:Catrìona|talk]]) at 05:05, 4 November 2018 (UTC).</small> | <small>Moved to mainspace by [[User:Larrybillinger|Larrybillinger]] ([[User talk:Larrybillinger|talk]]) and [[User:Catrìona|Catrìona]] ([[User talk:Catrìona|talk]]). Nominated by [[User:Catrìona|Catrìona]] ([[User talk:Catrìona|talk]]) at 05:05, 4 November 2018 (UTC).</small> | ||
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:*[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] Hi [[User:Catrìona|Catrìona]], review follows: article moved to mainspace 4 November; article exceeds minimum length; article is well written and cited in line throughout to reliable sources; I didn't detect any overly close paraphrasing from the sources given; hook is interesting and cited in the article to a reliable source that backs it up I have amended the hook slightly (ALT1 below) as the original made it appear the world record was for weight lost, when it was for duration. Let me know if you are not happy with the alternative. QPQ has been carried out. Looks good to go - [[User:Dumelow|Dumelow]] ([[User talk:Dumelow|talk]]) 15:58, 4 November 2018 (UTC) | :*[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] Hi [[User:Catrìona|Catrìona]], review follows: article moved to mainspace 4 November; article exceeds minimum length; article is well written and cited in line throughout to reliable sources; I didn't detect any overly close paraphrasing from the sources given; hook is interesting and cited in the article to a reliable source that backs it up I have amended the hook slightly (ALT1 below) as the original made it appear the world record was for weight lost, when it was for duration. Let me know if you are not happy with the alternative. QPQ has been carried out. Looks good to go - [[User:Dumelow|Dumelow]] ([[User talk:Dumelow|talk]]) 15:58, 4 November 2018 (UTC) | ||
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::*Fair point. I have no objection to ALT1. [[User:Catrìona|Catrìona]] ([[User talk:Catrìona|talk]]) 19:41, 4 November 2018 (UTC) | ::*Fair point. I have no objection to ALT1. [[User:Catrìona|Catrìona]] ([[User talk:Catrìona|talk]]) 19:41, 4 November 2018 (UTC) | ||
::::Thanks [[User:Catrìona|Catrìona]]. Just one other thing, there aren't any links to the article as yet. It'll need some added from other articles to stop it from being tagged as an orphan - [[User:Dumelow|Dumelow]] ([[User talk:Dumelow|talk]]) 20:32, 4 November 2018 (UTC) | ::::Thanks [[User:Catrìona|Catrìona]]. Just one other thing, there aren't any links to the article as yet. It'll need some added from other articles to stop it from being tagged as an orphan - [[User:Dumelow|Dumelow]] ([[User talk:Dumelow|talk]]) 20:32, 4 November 2018 (UTC) | ||
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Latest revision as of 06:46, 4 December 2018
- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:46, 4 December 2018 (UTC)
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Angus Barbieri's fast
... that Angus Barbieri fasted for more than a year and lost 276 pounds (125 kg), setting a world record?[1]
Moved to mainspace by Larrybillinger (talk) and Catrìona (talk). Nominated by Catrìona (talk) at 05:05, 4 November 2018 (UTC).
Hi Catrìona, review follows: article moved to mainspace 4 November; article exceeds minimum length; article is well written and cited in line throughout to reliable sources; I didn't detect any overly close paraphrasing from the sources given; hook is interesting and cited in the article to a reliable source that backs it up I have amended the hook slightly (ALT1 below) as the original made it appear the world record was for weight lost, when it was for duration. Let me know if you are not happy with the alternative. QPQ has been carried out. Looks good to go - Dumelow (talk) 15:58, 4 November 2018 (UTC)- ALT1: ... that Angus Barbieri fasted for more than a year, setting a world record and losing 276 pounds (125 kg)?
Added links from Maryfield Hospital and July 1966 Catrìona (talk) 20:55, 4 November 2018 (UTC)