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imported>BlueMoonset
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(hook "goats" and "singing" not found in article; otherwise, needs more sourcing)
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*[[File:Symbol redirect vote 4.svg|16px]]  There have been significant changes to the article over the past week and a half. Can a reviewer see whether the issues raised by Surtsicna remain while doing a full review of the article as it currently stands, notably the hook sourcing? Many thanks. [[User:BlueMoonset|BlueMoonset]] ([[User talk:BlueMoonset|talk]]) 04:36, 9 July 2013 (UTC)
 
*[[File:Symbol redirect vote 4.svg|16px]]  There have been significant changes to the article over the past week and a half. Can a reviewer see whether the issues raised by Surtsicna remain while doing a full review of the article as it currently stands, notably the hook sourcing? Many thanks. [[User:BlueMoonset|BlueMoonset]] ([[User talk:BlueMoonset|talk]]) 04:36, 9 July 2013 (UTC)
 
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::*Re the hook - I don't see anything in the article about goats or singing.
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:::"History" section is only sourced in the first paragraph
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:::"Seals" section has "citation needed" at the end.  [[User:Maile66|— Maile ]] ([[User talk:Maile66|talk]]) 21:53, 9 July 2013 (UTC)
 
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Revision as of 21:53, 9 July 2013

Animal transportation

Created by Seal Boxer (talk). Self nominated at 13:38, 27 June 2013 (UTC).

  • There's no article. If there were, and the DYK hook was adequately sourced in the article, I think it would be a keeper, except I'd change the archaic "whilst" to "while" in accordance with style guidelines on both sides of the Atlantic. ~Amatulić (talk) 15:05, 27 June 2013 (UTC)

Symbol question.svg There are a few completely unsourced or inadequately sourced paragraphs. The style should certainly be improved. I am not sure if the hook source qualifies as reliable, being self-published. The hook, however, would be excellent. Surtsicna (talk) 12:04, 28 June 2013 (UTC)

  • Symbol redirect vote 4.svg There have been significant changes to the article over the past week and a half. Can a reviewer see whether the issues raised by Surtsicna remain while doing a full review of the article as it currently stands, notably the hook sourcing? Many thanks. BlueMoonset (talk) 04:36, 9 July 2013 (UTC)
  • Re the hook - I don't see anything in the article about goats or singing.
"History" section is only sourced in the first paragraph
"Seals" section has "citation needed" at the end. — Maile (talk) 21:53, 9 July 2013 (UTC)