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:* [[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] Created on 28 Nov from a redirect, nom on 29/new enough. 2071 char/long enough. Neutral. Cited. No copyvio. No image. QPQ done. Hook is short enough and interesting, but inaccurate. Source says " She studied musicology, ornithology and social history". Text says she "excelled at music and natural history", and hook says she was a naturalist. I would buy that text and hook are the same but source indicates she studied people, not plants and animals or their environment. Thus, we need a new hook and the text needs to show she studied people and/or birds. Despite that, nice article. Love learning about interesting people. [[User:SusunW|SusunW]] ([[User talk:SusunW|talk]]) 04:25, 4 December 2015 (UTC)
  
 
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Annie Armitt

Created by Alafarge (talk). Nominated by Victuallers (talk) at 20:19, 29 November 2015 (UTC).

  • Symbol question.svg Created on 28 Nov from a redirect, nom on 29/new enough. 2071 char/long enough. Neutral. Cited. No copyvio. No image. QPQ done. Hook is short enough and interesting, but inaccurate. Source says " She studied musicology, ornithology and social history". Text says she "excelled at music and natural history", and hook says she was a naturalist. I would buy that text and hook are the same but source indicates she studied people, not plants and animals or their environment. Thus, we need a new hook and the text needs to show she studied people and/or birds. Despite that, nice article. Love learning about interesting people. SusunW (talk) 04:25, 4 December 2015 (UTC)