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<small>Created by [[User:Gizmo|Gizmo]] ([[User talk:Gizmo|talk]]), [[User:Duckduckgo|Duckduckgo]] ([[User talk:Duckduckgo|talk]]).&nbsp;Nominated by [[User:Gobonobo|Gobonobo]] ([[User talk:Gobonobo|talk]]) at 17:37, 20 October 2013 (UTC)</small>.
 
<small>Created by [[User:Gizmo|Gizmo]] ([[User talk:Gizmo|talk]]), [[User:Duckduckgo|Duckduckgo]] ([[User talk:Duckduckgo|talk]]).&nbsp;Nominated by [[User:Gobonobo|Gobonobo]] ([[User talk:Gobonobo|talk]]) at 17:37, 20 October 2013 (UTC)</small>.
  
:* [[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] New, long enough, within policy, no copyvio found via tool, '''needs QPQ'''. Hook doesn't have an immediate ref in article (see [[Wikipedia:Did you know#Eligibility criteria|3b]]). Please ping me if I don't respond. <span style='font:1.1em"Avenir";padding:1px 3px;border:1px solid #909'><font color="#909">czar</font>&nbsp;[[User:Czar|<font color="#909">♔</font>]]</span> 23:42, 20 October 2013 (UTC)
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:* [[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] New, long enough, within policy, no copyvio found via tool, '''needs QPQ'''. Hook doesn't have an immediate ref in article (see [[Wikipedia:Did you know#Eligibility criteria|3b]]). Please ping me if I don't respond. <span style='font:1.1em"Avenir";padding:1px 3px;border:1px solid #909'><span style="color:#909;">czar</span>&nbsp;[[User:Czar|<font color="#909">♔</font>]]</span> 23:42, 20 October 2013 (UTC)
:::I think QPQ is only required for self-nominations. I've added a source for the hook fact. [[User:Gobonobo|<font face="DejaVu Sans" color="333300">Gobōnobō</font>]] [[User_talk:Gobonobo|<sup>+</sup>]] [[Special:Contributions/Gobonobo|<sup>c</sup>]] 00:07, 21 October 2013 (UTC)
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:::I think QPQ is only required for self-nominations. I've added a source for the hook fact. [[User:Gobonobo|<span style="font-family:'DejaVu Sans'; color:333300;">Gobōnobō</span>]] [[User_talk:Gobonobo|<sup>+</sup>]] [[Special:Contributions/Gobonobo|<sup>c</sup>]] 00:07, 21 October 2013 (UTC)
::::Good call on the QPQ exemption. In doing a source check, the (primary) source doesn't appear to back up the article's previous sentence, but more importantly studies mustard gas's effect and not poison gases (plural) as the hook and article currently state. <span style='font:1.1em"Avenir";padding:1px 3px;border:1px solid #909'><font color="#909">czar</font>&nbsp;[[User:Czar|<font color="#909">♔</font>]]</span> 04:10, 21 October 2013 (UTC)
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::::Good call on the QPQ exemption. In doing a source check, the (primary) source doesn't appear to back up the article's previous sentence, but more importantly studies mustard gas's effect and not poison gases (plural) as the hook and article currently state. <span style='font:1.1em"Avenir";padding:1px 3px;border:1px solid #909'><span style="color:#909;">czar</span>&nbsp;[[User:Czar|<font color="#909">♔</font>]]</span> 04:10, 21 October 2013 (UTC)
:::::I don't have access to the ODNB reference, and suspect that it was the source for that wording. I've left a note with the article's creator. I've added another source that says "war gases", but if that isn't sufficient, I could reword the hook and article to just refer to mustard gas or war gases. [[User:Gobonobo|<font face="DejaVu Sans" color="333300">Gobōnobō</font>]] [[User_talk:Gobonobo|<sup>+</sup>]] [[Special:Contributions/Gobonobo|<sup>c</sup>]] 21:29, 21 October 2013 (UTC)
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:::::I don't have access to the ODNB reference, and suspect that it was the source for that wording. I've left a note with the article's creator. I've added another source that says "war gases", but if that isn't sufficient, I could reword the hook and article to just refer to mustard gas or war gases. [[User:Gobonobo|<span style="font-family:'DejaVu Sans'; color:333300;">Gobōnobō</span>]] [[User_talk:Gobonobo|<sup>+</sup>]] [[Special:Contributions/Gobonobo|<sup>c</sup>]] 21:29, 21 October 2013 (UTC)
:::::: You can change the hook to match the text to match the footnote or we can wait for the author—whatever's least painful for you works for me <span style='font:1.1em"Avenir";padding:1px 3px;border:1px solid #909'><font color="#909">czar</font>&nbsp;[[User:Czar|<font color="#909">♔</font>]]</span> 02:34, 22 October 2013 (UTC)
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:::::: You can change the hook to match the text to match the footnote or we can wait for the author—whatever's least painful for you works for me <span style='font:1.1em"Avenir";padding:1px 3px;border:1px solid #909'><span style="color:#909;">czar</span>&nbsp;[[User:Czar|<font color="#909">♔</font>]]</span> 02:34, 22 October 2013 (UTC)
:::::::I've reworded the hook and the article so that they both refer to mustard gas. [[User:Gobonobo|<font face="DejaVu Sans" color="333300">Gobōnobō</font>]] [[User_talk:Gobonobo|<sup>+</sup>]] [[Special:Contributions/Gobonobo|<sup>c</sup>]] 18:20, 22 October 2013 (UTC)
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:::::::I've reworded the hook and the article so that they both refer to mustard gas. [[User:Gobonobo|<span style="font-family:'DejaVu Sans'; color:333300;">Gobōnobō</span>]] [[User_talk:Gobonobo|<sup>+</sup>]] [[Special:Contributions/Gobonobo|<sup>c</sup>]] 18:20, 22 October 2013 (UTC)
::::::::[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]]  The second source doesn't support the phrasing of the article's sentence and should be removed, but the first source checks out, so I won't hold up the nom. (There are also several unsourced sections that either need end-of-paragraph footnotes or removal.) Edit at your leisure. <span style='font:1.1em"Avenir";padding:1px 3px;border:1px solid #909'><font color="#909">czar</font>&nbsp;[[User:Czar|<font color="#909">♔</font>]]</span> 18:30, 22 October 2013 (UTC){{#if:yes|</div></noinclude>|{{#ifeq:{{FULLPAGENAME}}|Template talk:Did you know/{{SUBPAGENAME}}|[[Category:Pending DYK nominations]][[Category:DYK/Nominations|Pending]]|{{#ifeq:{{FULLPAGENAME}}|Template:Did you know nominations/{{SUBPAGENAME}}|[[Category:DYK/Nominations|Pending]][[Category:Pending DYK nominations]]}}}}}}<!--Please do not write below this line or remove this line. Place comments above this line.-->
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::::::::[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]]  The second source doesn't support the phrasing of the article's sentence and should be removed, but the first source checks out, so I won't hold up the nom. (There are also several unsourced sections that either need end-of-paragraph footnotes or removal.) Edit at your leisure. <span style='font:1.1em"Avenir";padding:1px 3px;border:1px solid #909'><span style="color:#909;">czar</span>&nbsp;[[User:Czar|<font color="#909">♔</font>]]</span> 18:30, 22 October 2013 (UTC){{#if:yes|</div></noinclude>|{{#ifeq:{{FULLPAGENAME}}|Template talk:Did you know/{{SUBPAGENAME}}|[[Category:Pending DYK nominations]][[Category:DYK/Nominations|Pending]]|{{#ifeq:{{FULLPAGENAME}}|Template:Did you know nominations/{{SUBPAGENAME}}|[[Category:DYK/Nominations|Pending]][[Category:Pending DYK nominations]]}}}}}}<!--Please do not write below this line or remove this line. Place comments above this line.-->

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The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Allen3 talk 10:52, 23 October 2013 (UTC)

Antoinette Pirie

Created by Gizmo (talk), Duckduckgo (talk). Nominated by Gobonobo (talk) at 17:37, 20 October 2013 (UTC).

  • 16px New, long enough, within policy, no copyvio found via tool, needs QPQ. Hook doesn't have an immediate ref in article (see 3b). Please ping me if I don't respond. czar  23:42, 20 October 2013 (UTC)
I think QPQ is only required for self-nominations. I've added a source for the hook fact. Gobōnobō + c 00:07, 21 October 2013 (UTC)
Good call on the QPQ exemption. In doing a source check, the (primary) source doesn't appear to back up the article's previous sentence, but more importantly studies mustard gas's effect and not poison gases (plural) as the hook and article currently state. czar  04:10, 21 October 2013 (UTC)
I don't have access to the ODNB reference, and suspect that it was the source for that wording. I've left a note with the article's creator. I've added another source that says "war gases", but if that isn't sufficient, I could reword the hook and article to just refer to mustard gas or war gases. Gobōnobō + c 21:29, 21 October 2013 (UTC)
You can change the hook to match the text to match the footnote or we can wait for the author—whatever's least painful for you works for me czar  02:34, 22 October 2013 (UTC)
I've reworded the hook and the article so that they both refer to mustard gas. Gobōnobō + c 18:20, 22 October 2013 (UTC)
16px The second source doesn't support the phrasing of the article's sentence and should be removed, but the first source checks out, so I won't hold up the nom. (There are also several unsourced sections that either need end-of-paragraph footnotes or removal.) Edit at your leisure. czar  18:30, 22 October 2013 (UTC)