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:*[[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] The article is new enough and long enough. A QPQ has been done and I didn't find any close paraphrasing. Given that all of the sources are offline, I am assuming good faith on their reliability. The hook fact is cited inline, but only partially: the 38 new species of tarantula is cited, but not that he died at the age of 46 (indeed, no source is provided for either his date of birth or his date of death). [[User:Narutolovehinata5|Narutolovehinata5]] <sup>[[User talk:Narutolovehinata5|t]][[Special:Contributions/Narutolovehinata5|c]][[WP:CSD|csd]][[Special:Newpages|new]]</sup> 09:35, 30 September 2020 (UTC)
 
:*[[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] The article is new enough and long enough. A QPQ has been done and I didn't find any close paraphrasing. Given that all of the sources are offline, I am assuming good faith on their reliability. The hook fact is cited inline, but only partially: the 38 new species of tarantula is cited, but not that he died at the age of 46 (indeed, no source is provided for either his date of birth or his date of death). [[User:Narutolovehinata5|Narutolovehinata5]] <sup>[[User talk:Narutolovehinata5|t]][[Special:Contributions/Narutolovehinata5|c]][[WP:CSD|csd]][[Special:Newpages|new]]</sup> 09:35, 30 September 2020 (UTC)
 
::* {{Ping|Narutolovehinata5}} I have added two citations to the lead, one is online and confirms the year of birth and of death, the other is from the German Wikipedia and presumably confirms the actual dates. [[User:Cwmhiraeth|Cwmhiraeth]] ([[User talk:Cwmhiraeth|talk]]) 10:03, 30 September 2020 (UTC)     
 
::* {{Ping|Narutolovehinata5}} I have added two citations to the lead, one is online and confirms the year of birth and of death, the other is from the German Wikipedia and presumably confirms the actual dates. [[User:Cwmhiraeth|Cwmhiraeth]] ([[User talk:Cwmhiraeth|talk]]) 10:03, 30 September 2020 (UTC)     
 
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::::Thanks for the edit; however, as "age 46" is part of the hook, the reference needs to be duplicated at the sentence that goes {{tq|but died of lung disease a year later at the age of 46}} as well. In addition, the last paragraph of the "Life and career" section could be reworded since the word "tarantula" is repeated in relatively quick succession. [[User:Narutolovehinata5|Narutolovehinata5]] <sup>[[User talk:Narutolovehinata5|t]][[Special:Contributions/Narutolovehinata5|c]][[WP:CSD|csd]][[Special:Newpages|new]]</sup> 10:40, 30 September 2020 (UTC)
 
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Anton Ausserer

5x expanded by Cwmhiraeth (talk). Self-nominated at 06:01, 29 September 2020 (UTC).

  • Symbol question.svg The article is new enough and long enough. A QPQ has been done and I didn't find any close paraphrasing. Given that all of the sources are offline, I am assuming good faith on their reliability. The hook fact is cited inline, but only partially: the 38 new species of tarantula is cited, but not that he died at the age of 46 (indeed, no source is provided for either his date of birth or his date of death). Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 09:35, 30 September 2020 (UTC)
  • Template:Ping I have added two citations to the lead, one is online and confirms the year of birth and of death, the other is from the German Wikipedia and presumably confirms the actual dates. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 10:03, 30 September 2020 (UTC)
Thanks for the edit; however, as "age 46" is part of the hook, the reference needs to be duplicated at the sentence that goes Template:Tq as well. In addition, the last paragraph of the "Life and career" section could be reworded since the word "tarantula" is repeated in relatively quick succession. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 10:40, 30 September 2020 (UTC)