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*<s>... that the Chinese [[Junk (ship)|junk ship]] '''''[[Aqua Luna]]''''' ''(pictured)'' was launched in 2006 after 18 months of traditional construction by a craftsman supervised by a 73-year-old shipbuilder, but is powered by a motor rather than its three sails?</s>
 
*<s>... that the Chinese [[Junk (ship)|junk ship]] '''''[[Aqua Luna]]''''' ''(pictured)'' was launched in 2006 after 18 months of traditional construction by a craftsman supervised by a 73-year-old shipbuilder, but is powered by a motor rather than its three sails?</s>
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<small>Created by [[User:Mike Peel|Mike Peel]] ([[User talk:Mike Peel|talk]]), [[User:Chase me ladies, I&#39;m the Cavalry|Chase me ladies, I&#39;m the Cavalry]] ([[User talk:Chase me ladies, I&#39;m the Cavalry|talk]]).&nbsp;Nominated by [[User:Mike Peel|Mike Peel]] ([[User talk:Mike Peel|talk]]) at 22:53, 21 August 2013 (UTC)</small>.
 
<small>Created by [[User:Mike Peel|Mike Peel]] ([[User talk:Mike Peel|talk]]), [[User:Chase me ladies, I&#39;m the Cavalry|Chase me ladies, I&#39;m the Cavalry]] ([[User talk:Chase me ladies, I&#39;m the Cavalry|talk]]).&nbsp;Nominated by [[User:Mike Peel|Mike Peel]] ([[User talk:Mike Peel|talk]]) at 22:53, 21 August 2013 (UTC)</small>.
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:*[[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]]. Copy edits made. Everything else checks out. But the hook is too long (I count 211 including "Aqua Luna") and some of its content is dead wood. I propose cutting it a bit. [[User:Drmies|Drmies]] ([[User talk:Drmies|talk]]) 20:50, 24 August 2013 (UTC)  
 
:*[[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]]. Copy edits made. Everything else checks out. But the hook is too long (I count 211 including "Aqua Luna") and some of its content is dead wood. I propose cutting it a bit. [[User:Drmies|Drmies]] ([[User talk:Drmies|talk]]) 20:50, 24 August 2013 (UTC)  
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:* Thanks for suggesting the alt - it looks good to me. Apologies for over-running the permitted length with my original suggestion. Thanks. [[User:Mike Peel|Mike Peel]] ([[User talk:Mike Peel|talk]]) 16:57, 26 August 2013 (UTC)
 
:* Thanks for suggesting the alt - it looks good to me. Apologies for over-running the permitted length with my original suggestion. Thanks. [[User:Mike Peel|Mike Peel]] ([[User talk:Mike Peel|talk]]) 16:57, 26 August 2013 (UTC)
 
::*Alright--my modified hook was accepted by an independent reviewer, so we can send this on: [[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] Mike, no apology necessary. [[User:Drmies|Drmies]] ([[User talk:Drmies|talk]]) 22:44, 26 August 2013 (UTC)
 
::*Alright--my modified hook was accepted by an independent reviewer, so we can send this on: [[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] Mike, no apology necessary. [[User:Drmies|Drmies]] ([[User talk:Drmies|talk]]) 22:44, 26 August 2013 (UTC)
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Latest revision as of 10:06, 3 September 2013

The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Allen3 talk 10:06, 3 September 2013 (UTC)

Aqua Luna

Aqua Luna in 2009

  • ... that the Chinese junk ship Aqua Luna (pictured) was launched in 2006 after 18 months of traditional construction by a craftsman supervised by a 73-year-old shipbuilder, but is powered by a motor rather than its three sails?

Created by Mike Peel (talk), Chase me ladies, I'm the Cavalry (talk). Nominated by Mike Peel (talk) at 22:53, 21 August 2013 (UTC).

  • Symbol question.svg. Copy edits made. Everything else checks out. But the hook is too long (I count 211 including "Aqua Luna") and some of its content is dead wood. I propose cutting it a bit. Drmies (talk) 20:50, 24 August 2013 (UTC)
  • ALT1: ... that the Chinese junk ship Aqua Luna (pictured) was launched in 2006 after 18 months of construction in traditional style, but is powered by a motor rather than its three sails?
  • Symbol voting keep.svg ALT1 is well-written and concise while within the maximum length. The hook is referenced in #Construction. Alex ShihTalk 04:37, 25 August 2013 (UTC)
  • Thanks for suggesting the alt - it looks good to me. Apologies for over-running the permitted length with my original suggestion. Thanks. Mike Peel (talk) 16:57, 26 August 2013 (UTC)
  • Alright--my modified hook was accepted by an independent reviewer, so we can send this on: Symbol confirmed.svg Mike, no apology necessary. Drmies (talk) 22:44, 26 August 2013 (UTC)