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:*... that, while the ''standard'' guitar-tuning E-A-D-G-B-E includes one major third amid four perfect fourths ''(illustrated)'', the '''[[augmented-fourths tuning]]''' B-F-B-F-B-F has only tritone intervals? | :*... that, while the ''standard'' guitar-tuning E-A-D-G-B-E includes one major third amid four perfect fourths ''(illustrated)'', the '''[[augmented-fourths tuning]]''' B-F-B-F-B-F has only tritone intervals? | ||
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*... that regular guitar-tunings—such as [[major-thirds tuning|major-thirds]], all-fourths ''(illustrated)'', '''[[augmented-fourths tuning|augmented-fourths]]''', and all-fifth tunings—simplify improvisation for advanced guitarists and learning for beginners? | *... that regular guitar-tunings—such as [[major-thirds tuning|major-thirds]], all-fourths ''(illustrated)'', '''[[augmented-fourths tuning|augmented-fourths]]''', and all-fifth tunings—simplify improvisation for advanced guitarists and learning for beginners? | ||
| − | : <small><span style="border:1px solid black;padding:1px;">[[User:Kiefer.Wolfowitz|< | + | : <small><span style="border:1px solid black;padding:1px;">[[User:Kiefer.Wolfowitz|<span style="color:blue;background:yellow;">'''Kiefer'''</span>]][[User talk:Kiefer.Wolfowitz#top|<span style="color:blue;">.Wolfowitz</span>]]</span></small> 11:36, 15 June 2012 (UTC) |
*The length and date of the article are fine. The hook checks out in terms of length and citation. | *The length and date of the article are fine. The hook checks out in terms of length and citation. | ||
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::The third alternative would be snappier and is interesting, I agree. However, the hook would have to also note the class of trivial tunings, e.g. "C-C-C-C-C-C"<small>, the better to exemplify the definition of "pedant"—a man who strives to speak truly—formulated by Bertrand Russell</small>. I should try first to explain "tuning inversion" in the article; Sethares does so in an earlier chapter, I believe. I shall try to do so asap. | ::The third alternative would be snappier and is interesting, I agree. However, the hook would have to also note the class of trivial tunings, e.g. "C-C-C-C-C-C"<small>, the better to exemplify the definition of "pedant"—a man who strives to speak truly—formulated by Bertrand Russell</small>. I should try first to explain "tuning inversion" in the article; Sethares does so in an earlier chapter, I believe. I shall try to do so asap. | ||
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| − | ::Thanks again for the excellent suggestions. Please state your preferences for the hook-graphic combination. <small>Since I wish to attract readers to the article, I prefer a graphic or sound file to illustrate the article.</small> Thanks again for your help! Cheers, <small><span style="border:1px solid black;padding:1px;">[[User:Kiefer.Wolfowitz|< | + | ::Thanks again for the excellent suggestions. Please state your preferences for the hook-graphic combination. <small>Since I wish to attract readers to the article, I prefer a graphic or sound file to illustrate the article.</small> Thanks again for your help! Cheers, <small><span style="border:1px solid black;padding:1px;">[[User:Kiefer.Wolfowitz|<span style="color:blue;background:yellow;">'''Kiefer'''</span>]][[User talk:Kiefer.Wolfowitz#top|<span style="color:blue;">.Wolfowitz</span>]]</span></small> 09:43, 27 June 2012 (UTC) |
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*... that, among non-trivial guitar-tunings, only '''[[augmented-fourths tuning]]s''' such as B-F-B-F-B-F are the same in their right-handed and left-handed forms. | *... that, among non-trivial guitar-tunings, only '''[[augmented-fourths tuning]]s''' such as B-F-B-F-B-F are the same in their right-handed and left-handed forms. | ||
| − | :Per a suggestion of the reviewer, I have expanded the article so that this is better explained. It is now adequately documented with in-line citations with page references. <small><span style="border:1px solid black;padding:1px;">[[User:Kiefer.Wolfowitz|< | + | :Per a suggestion of the reviewer, I have expanded the article so that this is better explained. It is now adequately documented with in-line citations with page references. <small><span style="border:1px solid black;padding:1px;">[[User:Kiefer.Wolfowitz|<span style="color:blue;background:yellow;">'''Kiefer'''</span>]][[User talk:Kiefer.Wolfowitz#top|<span style="color:blue;">.Wolfowitz</span>]]</span></small> 12:37, 28 June 2012 (UTC) |
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| − | * It makes poetic sense to discuss perfect fourths or augmented-fourths on the 4th of July. Cheers, <small><span style="border:1px solid black;padding:1px;">[[User:Kiefer.Wolfowitz|< | + | * It makes poetic sense to discuss perfect fourths or augmented-fourths on the 4th of July. Cheers, <small><span style="border:1px solid black;padding:1px;">[[User:Kiefer.Wolfowitz|<span style="color:blue;background:yellow;">'''Kiefer'''</span>]][[User talk:Kiefer.Wolfowitz#top|<span style="color:blue;">.Wolfowitz</span>]]</span></small> 17:36, 1 July 2012 (UTC){{#if:yes|</div></noinclude>|{{#ifeq:{{FULLPAGENAME}}|Template talk:Did you know/{{SUBPAGENAME}}|[[Category:Pending DYK nominations]]|{{#ifeq:{{FULLPAGENAME}}|Template:Did you know nominations/{{SUBPAGENAME}}|[[Category:Pending DYK nominations]]}}}}}}<!--Please do not write below this line or remove this line. Place comments above this line.--> |
Latest revision as of 16:29, 2 July 2018
- The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Hawkeye7 (talk) 21:46, 2 July 2012 (UTC)
Augmented-fourths tuning
- ... that, while the standard guitar-tuning E-A-D-G-B-E includes one major third amid four perfect fourths (illustrated), the augmented-fourths tuning B-F-B-F-B-F has only tritone intervals?
- Reviewed: Vaccinium oxycoccos Diff showing review
Created/expanded by Kiefer.Wolfowitz (talk). Self nom at 22:31, 12 June 2012 (UTC)
- Alt2
- ... that regular guitar-tunings—such as major-thirds, all-fourths (illustrated), augmented-fourths, and all-fifth tunings—simplify improvisation for advanced guitarists and learning for beginners?
- Kiefer.Wolfowitz 11:36, 15 June 2012 (UTC)
- The length and date of the article are fine. The hook checks out in terms of length and citation.
Proposal of third alternative, not suitable for 4th of July
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- The first hook should be copyedited to
- ...that while the standard guitar-tuning has one major third amid four perfect fourths (illustrated) for its open-string intervals,
- ...and the second should be copyedited to
- ...simplify improvisation for advanced guitarists and learning for beginners?
We're good to go following those amendments. WilliamH (talk) 01:13, 27 June 2012 (UTC)
- Hi William (and other readers)!
- I implemented both of your copy-editing suggestions, so that the prose seems like native English. :)
- However, I retained the opening comma before "while", which balances the closing comma after "intervals". (Americans love commas almost as much as prepositional verbs.)
Discussion of third alternative
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- Thanks again for the excellent suggestions. Please state your preferences for the hook-graphic combination. Since I wish to attract readers to the article, I prefer a graphic or sound file to illustrate the article. Thanks again for your help! Cheers, Kiefer.Wolfowitz 09:43, 27 June 2012 (UTC)
Implementation of third alternative
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- It makes poetic sense to discuss perfect fourths or augmented-fourths on the 4th of July. Cheers, Kiefer.Wolfowitz 17:36, 1 July 2012 (UTC)
