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:[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] Length, history and reference verified. I much prefer the original hook; not only do I dislike hooks that suggest someone is interesting only because of who they're related to, in this one the related person isn't even linked, suggesting they're not notable. I have rewriten the hook to flow better, also. [[User:Daniel Case|Daniel Case]] ([[User talk:Daniel Case|talk]]) 06:32, 27 November 2014 (UTC)
 
:[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] Length, history and reference verified. I much prefer the original hook; not only do I dislike hooks that suggest someone is interesting only because of who they're related to, in this one the related person isn't even linked, suggesting they're not notable. I have rewriten the hook to flow better, also. [[User:Daniel Case|Daniel Case]] ([[User talk:Daniel Case|talk]]) 06:32, 27 November 2014 (UTC)
 
::Thanks for the rewrite, which is a definite improvement- would "medal-winning" be better (just to avoid repeating "prize")? Or award-winning? [[User:Xanthomelanoussprog|Xanthomelanoussprog]] ([[User talk:Xanthomelanoussprog|talk]]) 09:37, 27 November 2014 (UTC)
 
::Thanks for the rewrite, which is a definite improvement- would "medal-winning" be better (just to avoid repeating "prize")? Or award-winning? [[User:Xanthomelanoussprog|Xanthomelanoussprog]] ([[User talk:Xanthomelanoussprog|talk]]) 09:37, 27 November 2014 (UTC)
Daniel, now, now, [[Rosa Bonheur]] is major celebrity, Xanty is new in DYK's - or it was me - who forgot - so here you go - just read about her, [[Rosa Bonheur]] is absolute a  major painter in this genre. Absolutely famous, well know and big stuff. [[User:Hafspajen|Hafspajen]] ([[User talk:Hafspajen|talk]]) 15:16, 27 November 2014 (UTC)
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Daniel, now, now, [[Rosa Bonheur]] is major celebrity, Xanty is new in DYK's - or it was me - who forgot - so here you go - just read about her, [[Rosa Bonheur]] is absolute a  major painter in this genre. Absolutely famous, well know and big stuff. She is the dynamite of art world in animal depiction. [[User:Hafspajen|Hafspajen]] ([[User talk:Hafspajen|talk]]) 15:16, 27 November 2014 (UTC)
 
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Auguste Bonheur

La Sortie du pâturage

  • ... that Auguste Bonheur's prizewinning painting La Sortie du pâturage (pictured) was made a lottery prize by the French government as a way of promoting contemporary art?

Portrait of Auguste-François Bonheur by French photographer Adolphe Dallemagne

Created by Hafspajen (talk), Xanthomelanoussprog (talk), Fylbecatulous (talk). Nominated by Xanthomelanoussprog (talk) at 21:44, 22 October 2014 (UTC).

Symbol confirmed.svg Length, history and reference verified. I much prefer the original hook; not only do I dislike hooks that suggest someone is interesting only because of who they're related to, in this one the related person isn't even linked, suggesting they're not notable. I have rewriten the hook to flow better, also. Daniel Case (talk) 06:32, 27 November 2014 (UTC)
Thanks for the rewrite, which is a definite improvement- would "medal-winning" be better (just to avoid repeating "prize")? Or award-winning? Xanthomelanoussprog (talk) 09:37, 27 November 2014 (UTC)

Daniel, now, now, Rosa Bonheur is major celebrity, Xanty is new in DYK's - or it was me - who forgot - so here you go - just read about her, Rosa Bonheur is absolute a major painter in this genre. Absolutely famous, well know and big stuff. She is the dynamite of art world in animal depiction. Hafspajen (talk) 15:16, 27 November 2014 (UTC)