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:: '''ALT1''': ... that the '''[[BBC Radio Theatre|Concert Hall]]''' inside the [[BBC]]'s [[Broadcasting House]] was pressed into service as a dormitory at the outbreak of [[World War II]]?
 
:: '''ALT1''': ... that the '''[[BBC Radio Theatre|Concert Hall]]''' inside the [[BBC]]'s [[Broadcasting House]] was pressed into service as a dormitory at the outbreak of [[World War II]]?
 
:::The new hook is a lot better (the original hook honestly read like an advertisement), it's just that the sentence that talks about it (the one that starts before the quote) doesn't have a footnote. This will be good to go once that is addressed. [[User:Narutolovehinata5|Narutolovehinata5]] <sup>[[User talk:Narutolovehinata5|t]][[Special:Contributions/Narutolovehinata5|c]][[WP:CSD|csd]][[Special:Newpages|new]]</sup> 03:15, 14 November 2019 (UTC)
 
:::The new hook is a lot better (the original hook honestly read like an advertisement), it's just that the sentence that talks about it (the one that starts before the quote) doesn't have a footnote. This will be good to go once that is addressed. [[User:Narutolovehinata5|Narutolovehinata5]] <sup>[[User talk:Narutolovehinata5|t]][[Special:Contributions/Narutolovehinata5|c]][[WP:CSD|csd]][[Special:Newpages|new]]</sup> 03:15, 14 November 2019 (UTC)
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::::{{ping|Narutolovehinata5}} I added a new invocation of that citation (same one as the quote itself has) since it's such a minor addition. [[User:Raymie|Raymie]] ([[User talk:Raymie|t]] • [[Special:Contributions/Raymie|c]]) 06:23, 14 November 2019 (UTC)
 
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Revision as of 06:23, 14 November 2019

BBC Radio Theatre

BBC Radio Theatre
BBC Radio Theatre

Created/expanded by MIDI (talk). Self-nominated at 13:05, 12 November 2019 (UTC).

  •  Comment: Seems a rather boring hook to me - if it were me, I'd go with the sound leakage, or David Bowie & Ed Sheeran. Johnbod (talk) 22:49, 12 November 2019 (UTC)
  • Symbol question.svg Template:Ping New enough, long enough, QPQ present. No textual issues. I concur with Johnbod that a new hook is necessary as the other one (while meeting sourcing criteria) is rather dull. I actually would like to propose a different hook than either of those: Raymie (tc) 07:55, 13 November 2019 (UTC)
ALT1: ... that the Concert Hall inside the BBC's Broadcasting House was pressed into service as a dormitory at the outbreak of World War II?
The new hook is a lot better (the original hook honestly read like an advertisement), it's just that the sentence that talks about it (the one that starts before the quote) doesn't have a footnote. This will be good to go once that is addressed. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 03:15, 14 November 2019 (UTC)
Template:Ping I added a new invocation of that citation (same one as the quote itself has) since it's such a minor addition. Raymie (tc) 06:23, 14 November 2019 (UTC)