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* <s>... that police always tipped off the owner of '''[[Babette's|Babette's Supper Club]]''' before they raided the illegal casino in the back, and gamblers escaped through a trap door in the horse-betting room?</s> | * <s>... that police always tipped off the owner of '''[[Babette's|Babette's Supper Club]]''' before they raided the illegal casino in the back, and gamblers escaped through a trap door in the horse-betting room?</s> | ||
| − | * '''ALT1''' ... that police always tipped off the owner of '''[[Babette's|Babette's Supper Club]]''' before they raided | + | * '''ALT1''' ... that police always tipped off the owner of '''[[Babette's|Babette's Supper Club]]''' before they raided its backroom illegal casino, and gamblers escaped through a trap door? |
:* ''Reviewed'': [[Template:Did you know nominations/Hernán Orantes López]] (1st of 2) | :* ''Reviewed'': [[Template:Did you know nominations/Hernán Orantes López]] (1st of 2) | ||
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::*{{ping|Edwardx}} thank you. But I think it's important to add "in the back", so I did. [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 23:51, 8 August 2016 (UTC) | ::*{{ping|Edwardx}} thank you. But I think it's important to add "in the back", so I did. [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 23:51, 8 August 2016 (UTC) | ||
:::* Thanks [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]]. I should have read the article first! By "in the back", I had wrongly inferred that the police came in the back way, whereas the illegal casino itself was in the back room. But, that does mean that there is ambiguity. Perhaps "before they raided its backroom illegal casino". "Backroom" appears to be an okay word, at least in American English. What do you think? [[User:Edwardx|Edwardx]] ([[User talk:Edwardx|talk]]) 00:22, 9 August 2016 (UTC) | :::* Thanks [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]]. I should have read the article first! By "in the back", I had wrongly inferred that the police came in the back way, whereas the illegal casino itself was in the back room. But, that does mean that there is ambiguity. Perhaps "before they raided its backroom illegal casino". "Backroom" appears to be an okay word, at least in American English. What do you think? [[User:Edwardx|Edwardx]] ([[User talk:Edwardx|talk]]) 00:22, 9 August 2016 (UTC) | ||
| − | + | ::::*{{ping|Edwardx}} Yes, thank you, that works even better. I adjusted ALT1. [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 09:57, 9 August 2016 (UTC) | |
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... that police always tipped off the owner of Babette's Supper Club before they raided the illegal casino in the back, and gamblers escaped through a trap door in the horse-betting room?
- ALT1 ... that police always tipped off the owner of Babette's Supper Club before they raided its backroom illegal casino, and gamblers escaped through a trap door?
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Hernán Orantes López (1st of 2)
Created by Dr. Blofeld (talk) and We hope (talk). Nominated by Yoninah (talk) at 18:39, 6 August 2016 (UTC).
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- Template:Ping thank you. But I think it's important to add "in the back", so I did. Yoninah (talk) 23:51, 8 August 2016 (UTC)
- Thanks Yoninah. I should have read the article first! By "in the back", I had wrongly inferred that the police came in the back way, whereas the illegal casino itself was in the back room. But, that does mean that there is ambiguity. Perhaps "before they raided its backroom illegal casino". "Backroom" appears to be an okay word, at least in American English. What do you think? Edwardx (talk) 00:22, 9 August 2016 (UTC)
- Template:Ping Yes, thank you, that works even better. I adjusted ALT1. Yoninah (talk) 09:57, 9 August 2016 (UTC)