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* ... that '''[[Baloke]]''' a small village in [[Punjab, India]] is the birthplace of [[Satnam Singh Bhamara]] the first Indian to be drafted into the [[NBA]]?  <small>Source:http://indianexpress.com/article/sports/sport-others/draft-winds-sweep-satnam-singh-bhamras-dusty-village-ballo-ke/</small><small>http://www.thehindu.com/sport/other-sports/satnam-singh-gets-drafted-in-nba/article7359269.ece</small>
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* ... that '''[[Baloke]]''', a small village in [[Punjab, India]], is the birthplace of [[Satnam Singh Bhamara]] - the first Indian to be drafted into the [[NBA]]?  <small>Source:http://indianexpress.com/article/sports/sport-others/draft-winds-sweep-satnam-singh-bhamras-dusty-village-ballo-ke/</small><small>http://www.thehindu.com/sport/other-sports/satnam-singh-gets-drafted-in-nba/article7359269.ece</small>
 
:* ''Reviewed'': [[Template:Did you know nominations/Ampulloclitocybe clavipes]]
 
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<small>Created by [[User:Fitindia|Fitindia]] ([[User talk:Fitindia|talk]]). Self-nominated at 16:58, 17 October 2017 (UTC).</small>
 
<small>Created by [[User:Fitindia|Fitindia]] ([[User talk:Fitindia|talk]]). Self-nominated at 16:58, 17 October 2017 (UTC).</small>
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:* [[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] Article is new, long enough, no copyvio issues. The hook is well-cited and interesting although I would adjust the hook slightly to read like this :
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:*'''ALT1''': ... that '''[[Baloke]]''', a small village in [[Punjab, India]], is the birthplace of [[Satnam Singh Bhamara]] - the first Indian to be drafted into the [[National Basketball Association]]?
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:*Writing "National Basketball Association" in full is better as not everyone knows what the NBA could be referring to. [[User:Jon Kolbert|Jon Kolbert]] ([[User talk:Jon Kolbert|talk]]) 14:56, 18 October 2017 (UTC)
  
 
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Revision as of 14:56, 18 October 2017

Baloke

Created by Fitindia (talk). Self-nominated at 16:58, 17 October 2017 (UTC).

  • Writing "National Basketball Association" in full is better as not everyone knows what the NBA could be referring to. Jon Kolbert (talk) 14:56, 18 October 2017 (UTC)