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| − | * ... <s>that '''[[Baloke]]''', a small village in [[Punjab, India]], is the birthplace of [[Satnam Singh Bhamara]] - the first Indian to be drafted into the [[NBA]]?<s | + | * ... <s>that '''[[Baloke]]''', a small village in [[Punjab, India]], is the birthplace of [[Satnam Singh Bhamara]] - the first Indian to be drafted into the [[NBA]]?</s> <small>Source:http://indianexpress.com/article/sports/sport-others/draft-winds-sweep-satnam-singh-bhamras-dusty-village-ballo-ke/</small><small>http://www.thehindu.com/sport/other-sports/satnam-singh-gets-drafted-in-nba/article7359269.ece</small> |
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<small>Created by [[User:Fitindia|Fitindia]] ([[User talk:Fitindia|talk]]). Self-nominated at 16:58, 17 October 2017 (UTC).</small> | <small>Created by [[User:Fitindia|Fitindia]] ([[User talk:Fitindia|talk]]). Self-nominated at 16:58, 17 October 2017 (UTC).</small> | ||
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that Baloke, a small village in Punjab, India, is the birthplace of Satnam Singh Bhamara - the first Indian to be drafted into the NBA?Source:http://indianexpress.com/article/sports/sport-others/draft-winds-sweep-satnam-singh-bhamras-dusty-village-ballo-ke/http://www.thehindu.com/sport/other-sports/satnam-singh-gets-drafted-in-nba/article7359269.ece
Created by Fitindia (talk). Self-nominated at 16:58, 17 October 2017 (UTC).
Article is new, long enough, no copyvio issues. The hook is well-cited and interesting although I would adjust the hook slightly to read like this :- ALT1: ... that Baloke, a small village in Punjab, India, is the birthplace of Satnam Singh Bhamara - the first Indian to be drafted into the National Basketball Association?Source:http://indianexpress.com/article/sports/sport-others/draft-winds-sweep-satnam-singh-bhamras-dusty-village-ballo-ke/http://www.thehindu.com/sport/other-sports/satnam-singh-gets-drafted-in-nba/article7359269.ece
- Writing "National Basketball Association" in full is better as not everyone knows what the NBA could be referring to. Jon Kolbert (talk) 14:56, 18 October 2017 (UTC)
- Template:Ping yes I think ALT1 is better. Thank you. FITINDIA 15:32, 18 October 2017 (UTC)
Template:Re Perfect. QPQ done, hook is good to go. Jon Kolbert (talk) 15:53, 18 October 2017 (UTC)