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:::::{{ping|Yoninah}} thank you for the edit, looks much better now. I have added the citation that was required. Thank you. [[User:Fitindia|<font style="background: orange" face="Courier" color="#FFFFFF">''' FITINDIA '''</font>]] 03:51, 26 October 2017 (UTC) | :::::{{ping|Yoninah}} thank you for the edit, looks much better now. I have added the citation that was required. Thank you. [[User:Fitindia|<font style="background: orange" face="Courier" color="#FFFFFF">''' FITINDIA '''</font>]] 03:51, 26 October 2017 (UTC) | ||
::::::{{ping|Fitindia}} thank you. While you quoted the source accurately, the [[sex ratio]]s don't make sense. A [[ratio]] is a figure like 1:1 (one out of one), not a single number like 905. Unless this figure means 905 out of 1000? Perhaps you have a different source for the average sex ratio and child sex ratio? [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 08:49, 26 October 2017 (UTC) | ::::::{{ping|Fitindia}} thank you. While you quoted the source accurately, the [[sex ratio]]s don't make sense. A [[ratio]] is a figure like 1:1 (one out of one), not a single number like 905. Unless this figure means 905 out of 1000? Perhaps you have a different source for the average sex ratio and child sex ratio? [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 08:49, 26 October 2017 (UTC) | ||
| + | :::::::{{ping|Yoninah}} yes the figures are out of 1000. Thank you for pointing that out. I have added it to the article. [[User:Fitindia|<font style="background: orange" face="Courier" color="#FFFFFF">''' FITINDIA '''</font>]] 08:59, 26 October 2017 (UTC) | ||
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Baloke
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that Baloke, a small village in Punjab, India, is the birthplace of Satnam Singh Bhamara - the first Indian to be drafted into the NBA?Source:http://indianexpress.com/article/sports/sport-others/draft-winds-sweep-satnam-singh-bhamras-dusty-village-ballo-ke/http://www.thehindu.com/sport/other-sports/satnam-singh-gets-drafted-in-nba/article7359269.ece
Created by Fitindia (talk). Self-nominated at 16:58, 17 October 2017 (UTC).
Article is new, long enough, no copyvio issues. The hook is well-cited and interesting although I would adjust the hook slightly to read like this :- ALT1: ... that Baloke, a small village in Punjab, India, is the birthplace of Satnam Singh Bhamara - the first Indian to be drafted into the National Basketball Association?Source:http://indianexpress.com/article/sports/sport-others/draft-winds-sweep-satnam-singh-bhamras-dusty-village-ballo-ke/http://www.thehindu.com/sport/other-sports/satnam-singh-gets-drafted-in-nba/article7359269.ece
- Writing "National Basketball Association" in full is better as not everyone knows what the NBA could be referring to. Jon Kolbert (talk) 14:56, 18 October 2017 (UTC)
- Template:Ping yes I think ALT1 is better. Thank you. FITINDIA 15:32, 18 October 2017 (UTC)
Template:Re Perfect. QPQ done, hook is good to go. Jon Kolbert (talk) 15:53, 18 October 2017 (UTC)
Template:Ping please address the clarification tag that I added. I edited the page for English grammar; please also check that I didn't add/erase something by mistake. Thanks, Yoninah (talk) 20:48, 25 October 2017 (UTC)
- Template:Ping thank you for the edit, looks much better now. I have added the citation that was required. Thank you. FITINDIA 03:51, 26 October 2017 (UTC)
- Template:Ping thank you. While you quoted the source accurately, the sex ratios don't make sense. A ratio is a figure like 1:1 (one out of one), not a single number like 905. Unless this figure means 905 out of 1000? Perhaps you have a different source for the average sex ratio and child sex ratio? Yoninah (talk) 08:49, 26 October 2017 (UTC)
- Template:Ping yes the figures are out of 1000. Thank you for pointing that out. I have added it to the article. FITINDIA 08:59, 26 October 2017 (UTC)
- Template:Ping thank you. While you quoted the source accurately, the sex ratios don't make sense. A ratio is a figure like 1:1 (one out of one), not a single number like 905. Unless this figure means 905 out of 1000? Perhaps you have a different source for the average sex ratio and child sex ratio? Yoninah (talk) 08:49, 26 October 2017 (UTC)
- Template:Ping thank you for the edit, looks much better now. I have added the citation that was required. Thank you. FITINDIA 03:51, 26 October 2017 (UTC)