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{{*mp}}... that '''[[Barun Biswas]]''', an Indian school teacher, lead protests against a gang of [[extortion]]ists, who were using [[rape]] to terrorize the local people of Sutia in [[West Bengal]]?
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{{*mp}}... that '''[[Barun Biswas]]''', an Indian school teacher, lead protests against a gang of [[extortion]]ists who were using [[rape]] to terrorize the local people of Sutia in [[West Bengal]]?
 
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:* [[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] Article doesn't say "extortionists".  Otherwise everything looks good.  I suggest simplifying:  
 
:* [[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] Article doesn't say "extortionists".  Otherwise everything looks good.  I suggest simplifying:  
:::'''ALT1:''' ... that Indian school teacher '''[[Barun Biswas]]''' lead protests against a gang using [[rape]] to terrorize the local people of Sutia in [[West Bengal]]?
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:::'''ALT1:''' ... that Indian school teacher '''[[Barun Biswas]]''' led protests against a gang using [[rape]] to terrorize the local people of Sutia in [[West Bengal]]?
 
::Or using a different fact:
 
::Or using a different fact:
 
:::'''ALT2:''' ... that Indian school teacher '''[[Barun Biswas]]''' was murdered for protesting against [[rape]] in Sutia, [[West Bengal]]?
 
:::'''ALT2:''' ... that Indian school teacher '''[[Barun Biswas]]''' was murdered for protesting against [[rape]] in Sutia, [[West Bengal]]?

Revision as of 02:18, 24 August 2013

Barun Biswas

  • Comment: Feel free to suggest ALTs

Created by Titodutta (talk), Bgwhite (talk), Ekabhishek (talk), Orlady (talk), and 115.184.169.178 (talk). Nominated by Titodutta (talk) at 00:19, 11 August 2013 (UTC).

  • Symbol question.svg Article doesn't say "extortionists". Otherwise everything looks good. I suggest simplifying:
ALT1: ... that Indian school teacher Barun Biswas led protests against a gang using rape to terrorize the local people of Sutia in West Bengal?
Or using a different fact:
ALT2: ... that Indian school teacher Barun Biswas was murdered for protesting against rape in Sutia, West Bengal?
--ThaddeusB (talk) 02:16, 24 August 2013 (UTC)