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* [[File:Pictogram voting keep.svg|16px]] Offline sources support text and were not plagiarised to write. | * [[File:Pictogram voting keep.svg|16px]] Offline sources support text and were not plagiarised to write. | ||
* [[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] One fact tag needing cleaning. | * [[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] One fact tag needing cleaning. | ||
| + | **Done.[[User:Lajbi|'''<font face="Lucida handwriting" color="#78866B">Lajbi</font>''']] <sup>[[User talk:Lajbi|'''<font color="#C3B091">Holla @ me</font>''']]<small> • [[User:Lajbi/Current project|'''<font color="#808000">CP</font>''']]</small></sup> 10:13, 14 July 2012 (UTC) | ||
* [[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] The wording... is problematic. "who yesterday by the orders of General Ignacio" this for me almost makes me thinks plagiarism word for word in translating. It makes it very, very difficult to determine what day things happened. The tense usage here reminds me more of Wikinews writing than Wikipedia writing. | * [[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] The wording... is problematic. "who yesterday by the orders of General Ignacio" this for me almost makes me thinks plagiarism word for word in translating. It makes it very, very difficult to determine what day things happened. The tense usage here reminds me more of Wikinews writing than Wikipedia writing. | ||
| + | **Yes I tend to use translators as a complementary tool althhough I speak the needed languages. It must have slipped out of my rereads. Rephrased it to sound less like a press release.[[User:Lajbi|'''<font face="Lucida handwriting" color="#78866B">Lajbi</font>''']] <sup>[[User talk:Lajbi|'''<font color="#C3B091">Holla @ me</font>''']]<small> • [[User:Lajbi/Current project|'''<font color="#808000">CP</font>''']]</small></sup> 10:13, 14 July 2012 (UTC) | ||
* [[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] Where is the hook found in this article? I looked for secretly and it doesn't appear in the article. Covertly doesn't appear either. Please cite the paragraph where this fact can be found so it can be verified. --[[User:LauraHale|LauraHale]] ([[User talk:LauraHale|talk]]) 05:52, 14 July 2012 (UTC) | * [[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] Where is the hook found in this article? I looked for secretly and it doesn't appear in the article. Covertly doesn't appear either. Please cite the paragraph where this fact can be found so it can be verified. --[[User:LauraHale|LauraHale]] ([[User talk:LauraHale|talk]]) 05:52, 14 July 2012 (UTC) | ||
| + | **"General Cobos, who signed a ''secret'' agreement with republican Minister of Foreign Affairs Manuel Doblado" - that agreement is the basis of thier support. [[User:Lajbi|'''<font face="Lucida handwriting" color="#78866B">Lajbi</font>''']] <sup>[[User talk:Lajbi|'''<font color="#C3B091">Holla @ me</font>''']]<small> • [[User:Lajbi/Current project|'''<font color="#808000">CP</font>''']]</small></sup> 10:13, 14 July 2012 (UTC) | ||
[[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] Address above concerns and then comment here AND on my talk page to let me know so I can finish the review. --[[User:LauraHale|LauraHale]] ([[User talk:LauraHale|talk]]) 05:52, 14 July 2012 (UTC) | [[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] Address above concerns and then comment here AND on my talk page to let me know so I can finish the review. --[[User:LauraHale|LauraHale]] ([[User talk:LauraHale|talk]]) 05:52, 14 July 2012 (UTC) | ||
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Battle of Barranca Seca
- ... that the Spanish secretly supported the Mexican Republicans against the French at the Battle of Barranca Seca?
- Reviewed: William Thompson (Medal of Honor, 1950)
Created by Lajbi (talk). Self nom at 14:31, 13 July 2012 (UTC)
New enough and long enough. QPQ done. Image on article is public domain.- File:Pictogram voting keep.svg Offline sources support text and were not plagiarised to write.
- 16px One fact tag needing cleaning.
- Done.Lajbi Holla @ me • CP 10:13, 14 July 2012 (UTC)
- 16px The wording... is problematic. "who yesterday by the orders of General Ignacio" this for me almost makes me thinks plagiarism word for word in translating. It makes it very, very difficult to determine what day things happened. The tense usage here reminds me more of Wikinews writing than Wikipedia writing.
- Yes I tend to use translators as a complementary tool althhough I speak the needed languages. It must have slipped out of my rereads. Rephrased it to sound less like a press release.Lajbi Holla @ me • CP 10:13, 14 July 2012 (UTC)
- 16px Where is the hook found in this article? I looked for secretly and it doesn't appear in the article. Covertly doesn't appear either. Please cite the paragraph where this fact can be found so it can be verified. --LauraHale (talk) 05:52, 14 July 2012 (UTC)
- "General Cobos, who signed a secret agreement with republican Minister of Foreign Affairs Manuel Doblado" - that agreement is the basis of thier support. Lajbi Holla @ me • CP 10:13, 14 July 2012 (UTC)
16px Address above concerns and then comment here AND on my talk page to let me know so I can finish the review. --LauraHale (talk) 05:52, 14 July 2012 (UTC)
16px When concerns fixed, please comment here AND on my talk page so review can be finished.