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:* [[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] Article is new enough (created July 27), long enough, uses in-line citations and appears neutral.  The original hook is cited to [http://tennesseeencyclopedia.net/entry.php?rec=80 this] source, but, unless I missed it, the source doesn't say that the company provided the referenced train and jitney service, just that such service existed.  In any event, I think the '''alt 1''' hook is superior, and it is supported by the same source. My only quibble is with the term "grown up" as applied to the growth of a city.  It strikes me as overly colloquial; wouldn't "grown" without "up" be preferable?  If you agree, I suggest striking "up" from '''alt 1'''. QPQ has been satisfied.  And spot-checking finds no problems with unduly close paraphrasing, copyright violation or plagiarism. [[User:Cbl62|Cbl62]] ([[User talk:Cbl62|talk]]) 15:41, 30 July 2014 (UTC)
  
 
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Bemis, Tennessee

Created by Orlady (talk). Self nominated at 03:32, 30 July 2014 (UTC).

  • Symbol question.svg Article is new enough (created July 27), long enough, uses in-line citations and appears neutral. The original hook is cited to this source, but, unless I missed it, the source doesn't say that the company provided the referenced train and jitney service, just that such service existed. In any event, I think the alt 1 hook is superior, and it is supported by the same source. My only quibble is with the term "grown up" as applied to the growth of a city. It strikes me as overly colloquial; wouldn't "grown" without "up" be preferable? If you agree, I suggest striking "up" from alt 1. QPQ has been satisfied. And spot-checking finds no problems with unduly close paraphrasing, copyright violation or plagiarism. Cbl62 (talk) 15:41, 30 July 2014 (UTC)