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− | :* <!-- | + | :* [[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] New enough, long enough, well referenced, no close paraphrasing seen. But there is far too much linking going on inside sentences, which is why the ''Philippine Star'' ref (footnote 5) is cited so many times. Please move all the cites to the end of the sentence and eliminate the duplicates. For example: |
+ | :*He resumed his singing career<ref name="Bert Star"/> performing in clubs,<ref name="Bert Star"/><ref name="Fil-Am Courier">{{cite magazine| author =<!--Staff writer(s); no by-line.--> | title = In Memoriam| url= https://issuu.com/radiantcordero/docs/april_1_issue_color_for_web| magazine = Fil-Am Courier| location = Honolulu, Hawaii| date = April 1, 2018| access-date = July 3, 2020}}</ref><ref name="Inquirer 2018">{{cite news|url=https://lifestyle.inquirer.net/290160/bert-nievera-dies/|title=Filipino balladeer Bert Nievera dies at 81 in Las Vegas|first=Pocholo|last=Concepcion|newspaper=Philippine Daily Inquirer|date=March 27, 2018|accessdate=July 4, 2020|archive-url=http://archive.today/mmoOh|archive-date=July 4, 2020|url-status=live}}</ref> including in [[Ember's Club]] in [[Cubao]]<ref name="Remembering Baguio"/><ref name="Bert Star"/> where he was earning [[Philippine peso|₱]]15 a night.<ref name="Bert Star"/> | ||
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+ | :*He resumed his singing career performing in clubs, including in [[Ember's Club]] in [[Cubao]] where he was earning [[Philippine peso|₱]]15 a night.<ref name="Bert Star">{{cite interview|url=https://www.philstar.com/entertainment/2001/10/14/136578/sad-and-happy-ballads-bert-nievera|title=The sad and happy ballads of Bert Nievera|last=Nievera|first=Bert|interviewer=Ricky Lo|date=October 14, 2001|accessdate=October 8, 2018|website=The Philippine Star|archive-url=https://web.archive.org/web/20200702084834/https://www.philstar.com/entertainment/2001/10/14/136578/sad-and-happy-ballads-bert-nievera|archive-date=July 2, 2020|url-status=live}}</ref><ref name="Fil-Am Courier">{{cite magazine| author =<!--Staff writer(s); no by-line.--> | title = In Memoriam| url= https://issuu.com/radiantcordero/docs/april_1_issue_color_for_web| magazine = Fil-Am Courier| location = Honolulu, Hawaii| date = April 1, 2018| access-date = July 3, 2020}}</ref><ref name="Inquirer 2018">{{cite news|url=https://lifestyle.inquirer.net/290160/bert-nievera-dies/|title=Filipino balladeer Bert Nievera dies at 81 in Las Vegas|first=Pocholo|last=Concepcion|newspaper=Philippine Daily Inquirer|date=March 27, 2018|accessdate=July 4, 2020|archive-url=http://archive.today/mmoOh|archive-date=July 4, 2020|url-status=live}}</ref><ref name="Remembering Baguio">{{cite web |last1=Cimatu |first1=Frank |title=Remembering Baguio boy Bert Nievera |url=https://www.rappler.com/entertainment/news/199239-bert-nievera-baguio-boy-tribute |website=Rappler |accessdate=July 2, 2020 |date=March 30, 2018|archive-url=https://web.archive.org/web/20180330132301/https://www.rappler.com/entertainment/news/199239-bert-nievera-baguio-boy-tribute|archive-date=March 30, 2018|url-status=live}}</ref> | ||
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+ | :*The hook is okay but repeats Mathis' name three times. Could you try rewriting it? Hook ref verified and cited inline. No QPQ needed for nominator with less than 5 DYK credits. [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 09:48, 28 July 2020 (UTC) | ||
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Bert Nievera
- ... that Bert Nievera, dubbed the Johnny Mathis of the Philippines, encountered Mathis who watched him perform "Misty", Mathis' signature song? Source: "Frannie Kirk, who previously managed the SOS and briefly Nievera, recalled an instance at a lounge at the Sahara resort in Lake Tahoe when Nievera was doing his Mathis take before he joined the SOS. “He was doing ‘Misty,’ with eyes shut, and the real Johnny Mathis heard this voice and came to see where it was coming from,” Kirk said. “Roberto had his eyes shut and was surprised (to see Mathis) but was excited that he liked the act.”"
Created/expanded by Polo (talk). Self-nominated at 11:38, 5 July 2020 (UTC).
New enough, long enough, well referenced, no close paraphrasing seen. But there is far too much linking going on inside sentences, which is why the Philippine Star ref (footnote 5) is cited so many times. Please move all the cites to the end of the sentence and eliminate the duplicates. For example:
- He resumed his singing career[1] performing in clubs,[1][2][3] including in Ember's Club in Cubao[4][1] where he was earning ₱15 a night.[1]
- This would be rewritten as:
- He resumed his singing career performing in clubs, including in Ember's Club in Cubao where he was earning ₱15 a night.[1][2][3][4]
- If you need help, let me know.
- The hook is okay but repeats Mathis' name three times. Could you try rewriting it? Hook ref verified and cited inline. No QPQ needed for nominator with less than 5 DYK credits. Yoninah (talk) 09:48, 28 July 2020 (UTC)
- ↑ 1.0 1.1 1.2 1.3 1.4 Nievera, Bert (October 14, 2001). "The sad and happy ballads of Bert Nievera". The Philippine Star (Interview). Interviewed by Ricky Lo. Archived from the original on July 2, 2020. Retrieved October 8, 2018.
- ↑ 2.0 2.1 "In Memoriam". Fil-Am Courier. Honolulu, Hawaii. April 1, 2018. Retrieved July 3, 2020.
- ↑ 3.0 3.1 Concepcion, Pocholo (March 27, 2018). "Filipino balladeer Bert Nievera dies at 81 in Las Vegas". Philippine Daily Inquirer. Archived from the original on July 4, 2020. Retrieved July 4, 2020.
- ↑ 4.0 4.1 Cimatu, Frank (March 30, 2018). "Remembering Baguio boy Bert Nievera". Rappler. Archived from the original on March 30, 2018. Retrieved July 2, 2020.