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The result was: '''promoted''' by [[User:Gatoclass|Gatoclass]] ([[User talk:Gatoclass|talk]]) 15:39, 24 October 2019 (UTC)<br />
 
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* ... that Brooklyn's '''[[Betsy Head Park]]''' was designed to be "one of the finest in the world", with such facilities as a swimming pool and a stadium with a running track? <small>Source: Stevenson, Frederick Boyd (August 10, 1913). "Brownsville Leads Way for Playgrounds". Brooklyn Daily Eagle.</small>
 
* ... that Brooklyn's '''[[Betsy Head Park]]''' was designed to be "one of the finest in the world", with such facilities as a swimming pool and a stadium with a running track? <small>Source: Stevenson, Frederick Boyd (August 10, 1913). "Brownsville Leads Way for Playgrounds". Brooklyn Daily Eagle.</small>
 
** '''ALT1''':<s>... that the design for '''[[Betsy Head Park]]''' received first prize in the New York City parks portion of the [[Panama–Pacific International Exposition]]?</s> <small>Source: [https://www.nycgovparks.org/parks/betsy-head-memorial-playground/history NYC Parks]</small>
 
** '''ALT1''':<s>... that the design for '''[[Betsy Head Park]]''' received first prize in the New York City parks portion of the [[Panama–Pacific International Exposition]]?</s> <small>Source: [https://www.nycgovparks.org/parks/betsy-head-memorial-playground/history NYC Parks]</small>
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:* ''Comment'': Some content was copied from [[Brownsville, Brooklyn]] and was written by me three years ago. The current article is a 5x expansion from this split content.
 
:* ''Comment'': Some content was copied from [[Brownsville, Brooklyn]] and was written by me three years ago. The current article is a 5x expansion from this split content.
 
<small>Created by [[User:Epicgenius|Epicgenius]] ([[User talk:Epicgenius|talk]]). Self-nominated at 22:36, 14 October 2019 (UTC).</small>
 
<small>Created by [[User:Epicgenius|Epicgenius]] ([[User talk:Epicgenius|talk]]). Self-nominated at 22:36, 14 October 2019 (UTC).</small>
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: [[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] Substantial article, meticulously sourced, no copyvio obvious. A picture would be good, but I understand that they are all rather pale. I think that the quirky ALT2 might attract most viewers. Striking ALT1 as too much on the specifics of the prize. In hook and article, do we need "her own daughter" vs. "her daughter"? I find the wording "There have been several incidents over the years where people have drowned." a bit cold, - imagine you read that, and your daughter was one of those who drowned, - try something else? --[[User:Gerda Arendt|Gerda Arendt]] ([[User talk:Gerda Arendt|talk]]) 08:08, 15 October 2019 (UTC)
 
: [[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] Substantial article, meticulously sourced, no copyvio obvious. A picture would be good, but I understand that they are all rather pale. I think that the quirky ALT2 might attract most viewers. Striking ALT1 as too much on the specifics of the prize. In hook and article, do we need "her own daughter" vs. "her daughter"? I find the wording "There have been several incidents over the years where people have drowned." a bit cold, - imagine you read that, and your daughter was one of those who drowned, - try something else? --[[User:Gerda Arendt|Gerda Arendt]] ([[User talk:Gerda Arendt|talk]]) 08:08, 15 October 2019 (UTC)
 
::{{re|Gerda Arendt}} Thanks for the review. I don't know what wording would work best for describing these drowning incidents, but tried to reword it anyway. I revised ALT2 to remove the redundant word "own". [[User:Epicgenius|epicgenius]] ([[User talk:Epicgenius|talk]]) 12:55, 15 October 2019 (UTC)
 
::{{re|Gerda Arendt}} Thanks for the review. I don't know what wording would work best for describing these drowning incidents, but tried to reword it anyway. I revised ALT2 to remove the redundant word "own". [[User:Epicgenius|epicgenius]] ([[User talk:Epicgenius|talk]]) 12:55, 15 October 2019 (UTC)
::: [[File:Symbol voting keep.svg|16px]] ALT2 preferred, - thank you! Just amazing how you produce one of these exceptional articles after the other! --[[User:Gerda Arendt|Gerda Arendt]] ([[User talk:Gerda Arendt|talk]]) 14:11, 15 October 2019 (UTC)
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::: [[File:Symbol voting keep.svg|16px]] ALT2 preferred, - thank you! Just amazing how you produce one of these exceptional articles after the other! --[[User:Gerda Arendt|Gerda Arendt]] ([[User talk:Gerda Arendt|talk]]) 14:11, 15 October 2019 (UTC)</div><includeonly>|}}</includeonly><!--Please do not write below this line or remove this line. Place comments above this line.-->
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Latest revision as of 15:39, 24 October 2019

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Gatoclass (talk) 15:39, 24 October 2019 (UTC)

Betsy Head Park

  • ... that Brooklyn's Betsy Head Park was designed to be "one of the finest in the world", with such facilities as a swimming pool and a stadium with a running track? Source: Stevenson, Frederick Boyd (August 10, 1913). "Brownsville Leads Way for Playgrounds". Brooklyn Daily Eagle.

Created by Epicgenius (talk). Self-nominated at 22:36, 14 October 2019 (UTC).

Symbol question.svg Substantial article, meticulously sourced, no copyvio obvious. A picture would be good, but I understand that they are all rather pale. I think that the quirky ALT2 might attract most viewers. Striking ALT1 as too much on the specifics of the prize. In hook and article, do we need "her own daughter" vs. "her daughter"? I find the wording "There have been several incidents over the years where people have drowned." a bit cold, - imagine you read that, and your daughter was one of those who drowned, - try something else? --Gerda Arendt (talk) 08:08, 15 October 2019 (UTC)
Template:Re Thanks for the review. I don't know what wording would work best for describing these drowning incidents, but tried to reword it anyway. I revised ALT2 to remove the redundant word "own". epicgenius (talk) 12:55, 15 October 2019 (UTC)
Symbol voting keep.svg ALT2 preferred, - thank you! Just amazing how you produce one of these exceptional articles after the other! --Gerda Arendt (talk) 14:11, 15 October 2019 (UTC)