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::{{ping|Orygun}} Since the article has been expanded a lot since the nomination was submitted, I want to propose an additional hook. Thanks for considering. [[User:Flibirigit|Flibirigit]] ([[User talk:Flibirigit|talk]]) 00:22, 11 December 2020 (UTC) | ::{{ping|Orygun}} Since the article has been expanded a lot since the nomination was submitted, I want to propose an additional hook. Thanks for considering. [[User:Flibirigit|Flibirigit]] ([[User talk:Flibirigit|talk]]) 00:22, 11 December 2020 (UTC) | ||
:::* '''ALT1''' ... that journalist '''[[Bill Fitsell]]''' was reportedly scared of driving since he covered accidents? [https://www.thewhig.com/news/longtime-journalist-hockey-historian-bill-fitsell-remembered] | :::* '''ALT1''' ... that journalist '''[[Bill Fitsell]]''' was reportedly scared of driving since he covered accidents? [https://www.thewhig.com/news/longtime-journalist-hockey-historian-bill-fitsell-remembered] | ||
| + | ::::*Source and length of '''ALT1''' are good. Below is expanded version with more info in hook. It uses same source. | ||
| + | :::::'''ALT2'''... that journalist '''[[Bill Fitsell]]''' did not get a driver's license until he was 40 years old because he was afraid of driving due to all the accidents he covered? | ||
| + | :::::[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] I like '''ALT2''' because it has more detail, but all three of the hooks are good to go.--[[User:Orygun|Orygun]] ([[User talk:Orygun|talk]]) | ||
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Bill Fitsell
- ... that journalist Bill Fitsell was founding president of the Society for International Hockey Research and was a driving force behind Kingston's annual Historic Hockey Series? [1][2]
- Reviewed: Louis-Thomas Chabert de Joncaire
5x expanded by Flibirigit (talk) and Connormah (talk). Nominated by Flibirigit (talk) at 00:11, 5 December 2020 (UTC).
Article was expanded 5x in past 7 days; article is long enough and is adequately references with no evidence of plagiarism or content issues; hook is appropriate length and reference is good.--Orygun (talk) 21:20, 6 December 2020 (UTC)
- Template:Ping Since the article has been expanded a lot since the nomination was submitted, I want to propose an additional hook. Thanks for considering. Flibirigit (talk) 00:22, 11 December 2020 (UTC)
- ALT1 ... that journalist Bill Fitsell was reportedly scared of driving since he covered accidents? [3]
- Source and length of ALT1 are good. Below is expanded version with more info in hook. It uses same source.
- ALT2... that journalist Bill Fitsell did not get a driver's license until he was 40 years old because he was afraid of driving due to all the accidents he covered?
I like ALT2 because it has more detail, but all three of the hooks are good to go.--Orygun (talk)
- Template:Ping Since the article has been expanded a lot since the nomination was submitted, I want to propose an additional hook. Thanks for considering. Flibirigit (talk) 00:22, 11 December 2020 (UTC)