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::{{ping|Orygun}} Since the article has been expanded a lot since the nomination was submitted, I want to propose an additional hook. Thanks for considering. [[User:Flibirigit|Flibirigit]] ([[User talk:Flibirigit|talk]]) 00:22, 11 December 2020 (UTC)
 
::{{ping|Orygun}} Since the article has been expanded a lot since the nomination was submitted, I want to propose an additional hook. Thanks for considering. [[User:Flibirigit|Flibirigit]] ([[User talk:Flibirigit|talk]]) 00:22, 11 December 2020 (UTC)
 
:::* '''ALT1''' ... that journalist '''[[Bill Fitsell]]''' was reportedly scared of driving since he covered accidents? [https://www.thewhig.com/news/longtime-journalist-hockey-historian-bill-fitsell-remembered]
 
:::* '''ALT1''' ... that journalist '''[[Bill Fitsell]]''' was reportedly scared of driving since he covered accidents? [https://www.thewhig.com/news/longtime-journalist-hockey-historian-bill-fitsell-remembered]
::::*Source and length of '''ALT1''' are good. Below is expanded version with more info in hook. It uses same source.
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::::*Source and length of '''ALT1''' are good. <s>Below is expanded version with more info in hook. It uses same source.</s>
 
:::::<s>'''ALT2'''... that journalist '''[[Bill Fitsell]]''' did not get a driver's license until he was 40 years old because he was afraid of driving due to all the accidents he covered?</s>
 
:::::<s>'''ALT2'''... that journalist '''[[Bill Fitsell]]''' did not get a driver's license until he was 40 years old because he was afraid of driving due to all the accidents he covered?</s>
:::::[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] I like '''ALT2''' because it has more detail, but all three of the hooks are good to go.--[[User:Orygun|Orygun]] ([[User talk:Orygun|talk]])
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:::::[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] <s>I like '''ALT2''' because it has more detail, but all three of the hooks are good to go.--[[User:Orygun|Orygun]] ([[User talk:Orygun|talk]])</s>
 
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[[File:Symbol redirect vote 4.svg|16px]] {{ping|Orygun}} thank you for the follow up review. Since you are not able to approve a hook you proposed, another opinion is needed. I feel the word "reportedly" is essential in any hook mentioning Fitsell's driving since it is based on the recollection of his daughter, and not based on fact confirmed by independent sources. I prefer shorter hooks with less information, and other hook suggestions are always welcome. [[User:Flibirigit|Flibirigit]] ([[User talk:Flibirigit|talk]]) 00:11, 12 December 2020 (UTC)
 
[[File:Symbol redirect vote 4.svg|16px]] {{ping|Orygun}} thank you for the follow up review. Since you are not able to approve a hook you proposed, another opinion is needed. I feel the word "reportedly" is essential in any hook mentioning Fitsell's driving since it is based on the recollection of his daughter, and not based on fact confirmed by independent sources. I prefer shorter hooks with less information, and other hook suggestions are always welcome. [[User:Flibirigit|Flibirigit]] ([[User talk:Flibirigit|talk]]) 00:11, 12 December 2020 (UTC)

Revision as of 04:52, 12 December 2020

Bill Fitsell

5x expanded by Flibirigit (talk) and Connormah (talk). Nominated by Flibirigit (talk) at 00:11, 5 December 2020 (UTC).

Symbol confirmed.svg Article was expanded 5x in past 7 days; article is long enough and is adequately references with no evidence of plagiarism or content issues; hook is appropriate length and reference is good.--Orygun (talk) 21:20, 6 December 2020 (UTC)
Template:Ping Since the article has been expanded a lot since the nomination was submitted, I want to propose an additional hook. Thanks for considering. Flibirigit (talk) 00:22, 11 December 2020 (UTC)
  • ALT1 ... that journalist Bill Fitsell was reportedly scared of driving since he covered accidents? [3]
  • Source and length of ALT1 are good. Below is expanded version with more info in hook. It uses same source.
ALT2... that journalist Bill Fitsell did not get a driver's license until he was 40 years old because he was afraid of driving due to all the accidents he covered?
Symbol confirmed.svg I like ALT2 because it has more detail, but all three of the hooks are good to go.--Orygun (talk)

Template:Outdent Symbol redirect vote 4.svg Template:Ping thank you for the follow up review. Since you are not able to approve a hook you proposed, another opinion is needed. I feel the word "reportedly" is essential in any hook mentioning Fitsell's driving since it is based on the recollection of his daughter, and not based on fact confirmed by independent sources. I prefer shorter hooks with less information, and other hook suggestions are always welcome. Flibirigit (talk) 00:11, 12 December 2020 (UTC)

Symbol confirmed.svg Both original hook and ALT1 are good hooks and could be used as DYK. I officially withdraw ALT2...problem solved.--Orygun (talk) 04:45, 12 December 2020 (UTC)